[Denied]Tuslwmonster's Elf App

[TheGreasyChef 129]

OOC Information

Minecraft Account Name: tuslwmonster

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone: (GMT -5) Ohio, US

Have you read,

understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have. I.E. "Withholding evidence in relation to a breach of the rules is not permitted."

-I do not agree with this rule, because of the fact that, the person could be threatened with a hack of their account and will not want to be hacked. Another reason is, if they keep it private, no one will know that they know other than the person who told them. Thank you.

What previous

experience have you had in role-playing?: Other roleplay servers and D&D in my spare time.

How did you hear about

the Lord of the Craft?: From a friend. (Johnny_Steele)

Link any applications

that you have previously made for the server:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/74936-tuslwmonsters-app/?fromsearch=1

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/81345-tuslwmonsters-app/#entry697774

Have you posted this

application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so: Yes I have.

Have you read the Elven lore and shall ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes and yes.

Definitions

In your own words

define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Playing as a fictional character, involving your character in fights, relationships, and things that are dangerous irl or you may do irl.

Meta-gaming: When you use information that you learn OOC IC.

Power-emoting: When you make your character do things that are too powerful for his being or mind.

In-Character

Information:

Complete the

following biography on your character:

Full Name: Falin Harathrel

Current Age: 276

Race: Elf

Sub-race (if any): High elf.

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Falin was young when his parents were murdered. He and his brother 'Windrunner' had to fend for themselves at just the age of 8 and 6. Falin was a father figure to his little brother. He would hunt and gather food. They lived in a small tree house, hidden from view, they did almost everything together. They would play games and make small crafts together.

A few years later, Falin and his brother were traversing the forest, looking for food, when a tribal wood elf fired an arrow at 'Windrunner'. The arrow pierced his back and he fell to the ground. Instincts taking action, Falin fired an arrow into the wood elf's throat and ran to his brother's aid. The arrow had exited his chest through his rib cage. Falin checked for a pulse on his brother's body and could not find one. He grieved for many years after his brother's death. He was never the same after the death. He no longer had anyone in his life. He had nothing to live for.

About 200 years later, he met another beautiful high elf, by the name of Nikolette. They loved each other more than any other couple could. They were together for about 60 years until she had other duties to attend to. She could no longer be in a relationship, due to her profession. Now, Falin is searching for more friends, and another beautiful, blonde, high elf.

Ambitions for the Future: To make friends and great relationships.

Personality: Cocky and a bit of a show off.

Skills: Falin has learned how to brew a few potions, but he has forgotten to make a few, because of his lack of supplies. He is also great with a bow.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Handsome, golden hair.

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Any other details you wish to share about your character: He very much dislikes dwarves.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be

answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?

I walk over to the congregation and watch over the children, they turn around and see me towering over them. I ask them why they are picking on the wood elf. They give me a unsure answer and I tell them all to shoo. The wood elf thanks me over and over again. I simply tell him to run out of high elven lands before he gets himself killed. The next day, I travel through the same pathway and the boy and his father are waiting there for me. I grip the hilt of my sword as I continue walking towards them. The father has a small build, but is a few inches taller than me. As I walk up to the two the father grows enraged and begins to yell at me for harassing his son by telling him to stay out of High Elven lands. He says, "All of us share this land! You cocky High Elves think that you are the queen's robes when it comes to importance!" I simply nod and make hand gestures. This enrages him more. He pulls a long bow from his back ,notching an arrow. I quickly draw my sword, swinging it at the bow. I slice the bow in half with a swift motion. He gapes in surprise. I tell him to get the hell away from me and he takes off down the road with his son.

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

I break a sturdy branch from the trees above and help him up, supporting him with the branch. I then ask him how much he had in the pouch. He replies "About 73 Minas". I pull out a larger pouch and hand it to him, sending him on his way. As I am picking up the coins on the road a troupe of human bandits walk up the road. They stop next to me. And say "Excuse me ma'am", chuckling. I look up to them with a steady face and they tell me that I am going to give them all of my coins. I give a stern reply, standing up, towering over them. They look up to me and draw a dagger a piece. A draw my bow and aim for the largest one. They all back up a bit but continue to threaten me. The smallest one charges at me and I fire straight into his chest. The medium sized one charges me before I can notch another arrow so I smack him across the face with my bow. I regain my figure, notching another arrow and draw my bow string. I tell the last man that he should leave, before he ends up like his partners. He runs back the way he came as I take off the other way.

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved)

I walk over to the carriage with him and I ask if he has a fine pair of leather boots. He enters his carriage and then exits about 5 minutes later with about ten pairs of boots. He shows me boots with leather on the inside, iron on the out. Worn leather boots. And freshly stretched leather boots. I ask him he is asking for the newly stretched pair, and he replies with "200 Minas". My mouth drops wide open and I say, "How about 100 Minas?" And he shakes his head, saying, "Many people want these, I better put them away." I quickly reply with, "Wait! How about 150 Minas?" He looks at me and says, "175". I extend my hand and say "Deal." I then slip on my new leather boots and sprint down the path in joy.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Expand slightly on Meta-gaming and Power-emoting definitions or add examples.

 

Dead parents are one of the biggest clichés on the server. It's also extremely unlikely that Elven children could survive alone in the wilds. Please add server lore to the bio such as events, dates or holidays, which can be found on the forums and wiki.  

Explain in the bio how your character learned his skills.
 

Skin is too small to see.

 

Powergaming in the second Open Response Question, defeating the bandits so easily.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. Send me a PM if you have any questions.
 

[everblue2er101 906]

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