[Denied][Elf] Cutepiggy's App Redone With Correct Format.

[Genevieveee 234]

Out-Of-Character InformationPlease fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.Minecraft Account Name: cutepiggyHow old are you?: 13, but I am mature.Time-Zone: Central (Wisconsin)Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes.What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:Other mc servers, RP chat rooms on IMVU, and RP levels on LBPHow did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Bluestonelabs sent me!
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/81651-cutepiggys-application-for-whitelist/In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:Role-playing:Roleplaying, Is playing as any character you can imagine and create, And play as that character. Forexample you may want to be a Dwarf merchant or a Orc prince, It is your idea, creation, and imagination.Meta-gaming:Using OFC (out of character) information in game, Usualy to your benifit. Such as,"Maya sees a stranger, and says "Oh hello butterfreak3345" Or their ig name such as "Litek"In-Character Information:Complete the following biography on your character:Full Name: Melody SiolnCurrent Age: 25Sub-race (if any):Wood ElfPast / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):Diary entry, age 12.I couldn't stop it, I could not hear them scream, or him sneaking up the creaky steps. All I could do was feel the vibrationsof my heart pounding. The last time I saw my family was last week. We went to visit our friend. I held my fathers hand. Ibriefly remember a strange man staring at us beyond the trees. Hes evil green eyes looking at us desperatly. I know hemust have been the murderer. But now, I am a orphan. Traveling my way to a new land where my new family willtake me in, But I know they will never be as kind, and caring as my true family.I now think back about when my bestfriend Jullias died. His last words to me were "Meet me in my sorrow land" I stillcannot understand what that meant, but I am confident I will soon find out. But now is not the time to mourn about him or my family. As this boat sways and sails its way away from my homeland, I stare at the moon and stars, and wonder,What awaits me in this new land?Ambitions for the Future: Melody hopes to grow up with a big family. But before, She wantsto go on an adventure. Maybe on a voyage out to seas, or into a mysterious cave wheretreasure awaits. On her journeys, she wants to meet new friends, who some may turn thatshe is in love with them.Personality:Melody is very shy as stated above. Melody holds onto a small lockett of her family before their death. She will do anything to protect it, even if it means losing a friend. Melody is also a adventurous girl, though shehas only been on one (which was her coming to this new land from her old home far away), she would die to go on yetanother. Being born deaf made her incapable of ever hearing the song of the birds, or the voice of the water, this makes her sometimes depressed.Skills:Melody is very skilled at archery. Though she is more interested and skilled in making friends.But besides that, Melody has few skills.Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):Melody has beautiful long red hair. Her deep blue eyes, and boney fingers. She usually wears cloths to match her feelings,which are usualy sad, and shy so cooler colors such as blue and white. Melody is moderatly skinny, and has pink blushing cheeks. She enjoys wearing thinks also nature-y such as flowers in her hair and braclets of leaves. She isquite pale too, the sun often just doesnt sink in.Any other details you wish to share about your character:Melody is also diabetic, so she sometmies freaks out. (Not enough to cause caos or ban)Open-Response-QuestionsEach question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.____1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?Answer:Because I am deaf, I do not hear the High Elvse. But as I continue on my way, I do run into them. I could tell that the High Elves were bulling the child.I told them to shoo. But they just swarmed around me. I picked up the child and ran.I finally stopped running at a inn. I pulled out a notebook from my pouch and asked the boy where his parents were.The boy replied that they were in the city shopping. The boy led me to his small cottage.At departure, I gave him a small dagger in case something were to happen.2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?Answer: I help the old man up, and notice a cut on his arm. I tear a strip of my shirtoff and wrap it around as a bandage.I then pick up the old mans money and places itin the bag. The old man thanks me (lip reading). I nodd back. It turned out we wereboth heading to the market. When we arrive, I buy the old man a nice to hat,Then we go our seperate ways.3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).Answer: I ask the merchant if he has any arrows. He scrambles around in a box labeled

"Apparel". I tell the merchant it would most likely be in the box labeled "weapons" in the back. The man coughs and
searches the box. He comes out with multiple types of arrows. There were wooden with iron tips, Wood with stone tips,
and Iron with iron tips. I ask how much for the Wood and iron arrows. He replies that they are 30 each. Shocked,
I ask, "How about 10" He says that isn't enough, he bargens 20, I say 15. He says 18. I say 16, my final offer. FInally
he agrees. I buy 5 new arrows.


Thanks for Reading!
I truly hope I get whitelisted on my first try, Even though it is unlikely.
And even though it is not a requirement, I will do a brief discription of my self for good measures.

My name is Jenna, I love to play video games. I am very kind to anyone who is kind to me, if they arn't I try to ignore them. I love to rp, and try to think out of the box, and I like old music better than modern.
I wish more than anything to get whitelisted on this server, and want to play asap.
If you have any questions for me, let me know!
I also often check my game email (A email I use only for game-related things)
@:
[email protected]


(I love baking btw)
Thanks!
-CP <3




















The Dwarven Race are the underground dwellers of the Lord of the Craft - they reside in huge caverns, deep below the surface filled with valuable minerals and metals.




Useful Links:
Dwarven Wiki Page
Dwarven Nation
Subraces
Dwarven Roleplay Forum
Dwarf Characters
Dwarven History
Dwarven Clans

The Format:
Copy and paste this into a new topic in the Application Submissions forum area, then fill it out. In the topic title put [Dwarf] at the beginning and then your Minecraft name.



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Out-Of-Character InformationPlease fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.Minecraft Account Name:How old are you?:Time-Zone:Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:DefinitionsIn your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:Role-playing:Meta-gaming:Power-emoting:In-Character Information:Complete the following biography on your character:Full Name:Current Age:Sub-race (if any):Clan (if any):Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):[/b]Ambitions for the Future:Personality:Skills:Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):Any other details you wish to share about your character:Open-Response-QuestionsEach question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.____1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?Answer:2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?Answer:3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?Answer:

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

 

Denied.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

Need to provide a Power-emoting definition.
 

Dead parents are extremely cliché, and you may want to change this. Please add server lore such as diseases, places or dates to the bio.

 

Definitely explain more in-depth in the bio how being deaf has affected her.

 

Being born deaf means that the chances of your character being able to speak coherently are extremely low.

 

Spelling errors throughout the application.

 

Somehow, the application formatting is really, really broken. I'm not even sure how that happened. On your next attempt make sure to copy and paste only the application format itself and nothing else.

 

Dwarven application doesn't need to be included.

 

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. Send me a PM if you have any questions.

[everblue2er101 906]

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