[Denied][Orc] Lavaleprechaun

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[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

 

Hello! After reading through your application, I decided to deny it for the following reasons:

 

 

Even though you agreed to use the official Orcish lore in your biography, you didn't. Here is a link to the wiki to help you: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/]

 

There is no "Gal" clan.

 

There is no Orcish city called "Galthar".

 

There is no special type of Orc that can breed faster than a different type of Orc.

 

An Orc can not survive on his own when he is just a baby, let alone in the desert.

 

An Orc does not start to get into puberty from 3 days that he was born. Yes, they age faster, they're full grown when they are 20, but that is just too fast.

 

Ghosts do not simply appear and teach you something, so your parents cannot come to you after their death and teach you how to tame beasts, how to lead an army, etc.

 

Orcs do not worship any Gods. The closes you can come to a God is Krug, which isn't really a God, since all Orcs are descendants of Krug.

 

Your first two Open Response Questions contain severe powergaming. In the first one, you give absolutely no chance of the other Orc to fight back. In your second Open Response Question, you simply kill all guards and protectors, which is also powergaming. Also, you need a VA before you can kill or raid.

 

Lastly, I wish for you to expand on all Open Response Questions, add some dialogue and expand on them.

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, pop me a PM!

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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