[Denied][Orc] Thror Application

[Thror 0]

 

Out-Of-Character
Information

 

Please
fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the
essential details are accurate.

 

 

 

Minecraft
Account Name: _Young_Thor_

 

How old are
you?:12

 

Time-Zone:GB

 

Have you
read, understood and agreed to the rules?:yes

 

What
previous experience have you had in role-playing?: skyrim

 

How did you
hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: i was just searching minecraft vids on youtube and came across LotC, ive watched loads now and ever since then ive wanted to be in the server.

 

Link any
applications that you have previously made for the server: n/a

 

Have you
posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link
above): yes

 

Have you
read the Orcish lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in
your biography?: yes i will, proudly.

 

 

 

Definitions

 

In your
own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from
elsewhere!:

 

 

 

Role-playing: taking on the role of someone suited to the environment you are playing in. 

 

Meta-gaming: ive never heard this term before

 

Power-emoting: using words in game to cancell out someones words e.g Archie siftly grabs an arrow and fires it from his bow killing Urolk, therefore meaning Urolk cannot say anything back.

 

 

 

In-Character
Information:

 

Complete
the following biography on your character:

 

 

 

Full Name: Ugrok-Iron Fist

 

Current Age:18

 

Past / History
(include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

i grew up in an orcish city and my father lost his life in a raid against the undead whilst i was the age of 5.

my mother raised me as a single parent, once i reached the age of eight my mother sent me of to an orcish swordsman to learn the arts of orcish warfare. i kept on learning from him untill i was 14, then i started hunting down undead alone to try and avenge the death of my father.

 

one hunting trip i stumbled across some ruins, i wondered further inside with my axes drawn, i then found with a massive spear plunged into his chest , a dead orc, i then saw an amulet hanging around his neck, which at once i recognised from my childhood as the one my father wore, i took it back to the city and gave it to my mother to keep, having avenged my father i stayed back at the city for a while.

 

Ambitions for
the Future: to bring honour and prowess to my family though bloody combat.

 

Personality: doesn't like anyone who gets in my way, friendly to other orcs of a strong build, intimidating.

 

Skills: good swordsman and axe wielder.

 

Appearance (this
must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): not a good image(see bottom)

mouth with teeth sticking out, helmet with four horns on top, normal eyes, no hair, axe strung on back, muscles on body, loincloth, iron+leather-like gauntlets, metal shoulder pads and metal boots.

 

Any other
details you wish to share about your character: n/a

 

 

 

Open-Response-Questions

 

Each
question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which
must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not
break character or lore at any point.

 

____

 

 

 

1. You
are roaming the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks, as you near the Arena
you spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human garbs as he looks at you he
smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let me teach you of
civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!”, how do you react?

 

 

 

Answer: me: no, orcs are ment for war and combat, not to learn about politics!

him: but where will war get us now, hmmn?

me: get lost and go find someone who cares for you before i ram my axe down your throat.

 

 

 

2. As you
are watching an Arena fight between two Orcs, the Goj of Krug walks towards the
Arena, and shouts “Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz
zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd
raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater
upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!” How do you react to this?

 

 

 

Answer: i reply 'yes sir' and run off to the warbands and i prepare to pillage the farms and lands around to bring back the sacrifices for the vestival.

 

 

 

3. As you
are travelling in the barren Orcish deserts you come across a quiet oasis. Beside
it sits a small tent where a young orc is preparing a meal of roasted halfling.
He calls you over, offering you to join in with his meal. What does your
character do?

 

 

 

Answer:

me: nay young warrior, i was just going to fetch some halflings to roast over a spit myself.

him: oky but im almost finished my yummy halfling!

me: no, i kill my own food.

 

 

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

Sorry to deny this application, but there are a few things I would like you to fix.

- Your definition of meta-gaming needs to be redone. Use this guide ( http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/ ) to help you, but remember to put the definition into your own words.

- You did not include any server lore in your biography. Try to include city names, nation names, and perhaps even mention historical events and people from Lord of the Craft. Much of this, you can find here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/forum/16-orcs-roleplay/

- Your biography has a time error. You state that your Orc is 18, and that when your character was 5, his father died in the Undead attacks. The era of Undead ended over 70 years ago in-game, so if your character is currently 18, then that is impossible.

- Your Open-Response Questions need expanding. Try to make these AT LEAST a paragraph long, and add lots of details!

Good luck next time, Thror! If you have any questions, feel free to private message me. Do not re-apply for 24 hours after this denial, or your next application will be automatically denied.

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

Moved to Denied Forum