[Denied]Human

[44rachet 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.



Minecraft Account Name:44rachet

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone:Pacific

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:On multiple medievil RP servers and a few Harry Potter themed ones

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching for a new LOTR RP server.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:



Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:



Role-playing:To take the role of a new person and live as them.

Meta-gaming:Stategy themed gaming.

Power-emoting: To force ones actions on another.



In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:



Full Name:Human. Jack Treaty

Current Age:21

Sub-race (if any):Northerner

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs
long):Grew up in a small fishing village. Learning to hunt from a young
age his archery soon grew to the skill of almost that of an elf. From
hunting deer he learned the art of stealth.

And from his father who was a retired soilder, he learned swordsmanship
but never excelled in it as his father had. But when he was at the age
of 16 his village was attacked by Orcs while he was out hunting. When he
returned he found the village burned and plundered.

Furios he made a vow that he would hunt and kill every last Orc. After
spending five years in the wild searching and hunting stray Orcs he
decided

to follow the path of his father and joined the kings army and is now awaiting an answer to his request.

Ambitions for the Future: To help the

Personality: Dark but when you get to now him good-hearted.

Skills: Archery stealth  and climbing.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1107500/ranger/

Any other details you wish to share about your character:Open-Response-QuestionsEach
question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one
paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as
descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.____1.
Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure
stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly
up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you
do?Answer:I begin to chase the man and when he runs I follow
close behind. When he runs into the city hoping to lose me on the
rooftops.I put on a extra burst of speed and tackle him of the
roofs.While we plummet I shove him on the bottom using him to break my
falland when the soilders arrive I quickly unseen.2.
Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large
clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an
unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two
heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed
with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?Answer:Swearing
for not bringing my bow i sneak upon the bandit closest to me slitting
his throat.When the second man turns and attacks I fumble to block the
thrust giving the old man time to strike. But the old man is slow and
his attack is easily blocked.But while he is turned i quickly use my
sword to cut him in the legs forcing him to his knees.Grabbing him by
his shirt I tell him that next time make sure Jack Treaty isnt around.3.
You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a
small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and
notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that
he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is
willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do?
(Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that
happens).Answer:I proceed in begining to haggle for a set of
throwing knives which I offer a meager price of 2 coppers. But he wants a
whole 3 gold coins instead so I offer 5 silver(10 coppers to a silver
15 silvers to a Gold) noting the quality of the knives. He says he wont
go under one gold coin.I then begin to walk away then he calls me back
saying he will accept and will throw in a small dagger he was selling.

[Roxforbraynz 251]

 

 

1.  Incorrect Meta-Gaming definition. Also, please expand upon all your definitions and add meta-gaming and power-emoting examples.

 

2.  Your backstory doesn't tell me much about your character. I have no clue who he is or why he's different from any other average Joe. Work on your biography some more so your character isn't so two-dimensional. Also, Orcs raiding your village is unfathomably cliche. Try something else.

 

3.  Please expand upon your Open Response Questions. Make them read like short stories with dialogue between the characters and with detailed actions. For your first and second Open Response Questions, defeating the shady man and the bandits so easily could be considered power-gaming/power-emoting. As to your third Open Response Question, we don't use a copper/silver/gold system. We have our own special currency called "Mina".

 

4.  Though not the sole reason for denial, your skin is very... generic. I'd suggest finding or asking for a new skin.

 

 

Please wait at least a full twenty four hours as of this post's edit (seen below) before posting your next attempt. If you have any questions, feel free to send me a message.

Good luck with your next application!

Edited March 15, 2013 by Kefi Moonblossom (Rox)

[Roxforbraynz 251]

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