[Denied]Segavex Egrotus, Mountain Dwarf

[Genaralgr 16]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Generalgr
How old are you?: 16 Years
Time-Zone: Central Standard Time
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Much on other games such as: Runescape, Dungeons and Dragons, League of Legends, World of Warcraft, Joined RP Clans, Guilds ETC.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I looked for good Minecraft RP servers on Google.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: None.
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes. I will.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Assuming the role, or part of a character's part, as your own. Not of my own life, but in text, video games, Cos play or any other Role playable activity.
Meta-gaming: Your knowledge of how the enemy ,or other player, will counter-act given your choice of action.
Power-emoting: Too much emoting. Emoting is actions that the character that you are role playing does. For example: Segavex grabs his sword, stabs the knight and laughs over its dead body.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Segavex Egrotus
Current Age: 18
Sub-race (if any): None.
Clan (if any): Grandaxe Clan.
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Segavex screams as he spots his father beaten and bloodied on the ground. "Father! Do not die on me!" He screams. "S- Segavex, Do not be afraid. DO NOT." His father whispers. As he struggles to speak, he smiles and breathes his last breath on Kal'Karik. "NO FATHER!" He sobs. "Farewell." As Segavex steps up to leave his father he is confronted by a human just as he struck down another of his brothers. The human rips his sword from the dwarfs chest and turns to meet Segavex. "HA. This should be as easy as killing a baby cow." He snarls. "I will strike you down, and feed your head to the dragons of the wilderness. YOU DOG!" Screams Segavex. The human advances and Segavex hears the familiar sound of a sword slashing through air. Segavex barely jumps out of the way of the iron sword as the human stumbles toward him. While the human regains position Segavex brings the end of his axe directly upon the humans ankle, and trips him to the ground. "You little pest!" The human squeals as he regains his position on his feet and attempts to strike again. The iron blade hits Segavex in the upper right arm. the human curves the blade as in lingers inside Segavex. "AHH!" Segavex yells. He brings his axe to his left hand and swings it in the most unique way that the human yelps in despair. "Die dog!" Crys Segavex. The axe slices the human in the left shoulder, and the bone shows as he falls to the ground. "Your race will be DESTROYED! My death will make no difference!" The human tells him. "It does to me. The death of you will be one of the THOUSANDS to come in the avenging of my father!" Segavex slices the humans head in two. Then, he stumbles over as his world goes to a blur. The black overtakes him as he falls into what seems an eternity of sleep. As he woke, Segavex noticed that his wounds were dressed and that he had been put in a dwarven house. slowly moving, he brings himself to the edge of the bed. As he sits, he remembers his family in the fight in very short bursts. He cries. Just then he remembers his brother. "Olaf, I did not see him die." He hopes that his brother Olaf safely made it through the human skirmish. He hears a voice "Sleep, and dream of better days." Segavex falls to sleep and rests his tortured body.
Ambitions for the Future: Segavex wants to live peacefully
Personality: Shy, Peaceful, Helpful, Caring, Loves animals, 
Skills: Good with Battle axes, Mining, Persuading, Endurance, Tolerant with the Wilderness 
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://generalgr.tumblr.com/image/46098346278
Any other details you wish to share about your character: On Segavex's right Bicep, The letter S is carved into him.

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

Answer: It has been a good day mining in the underground caves of Kalos. Segavex has found many ores and precious minerals and wonders to himself. "How could this get any better?" As he steps into what looks like a ravine opening he spots what looks to be the biggest vein of diamonds Segavex has ever seen. "WHOA." He whispers in amazement. As he looks for a way to obtain the diamonds his heart sinks as he spots a very small and unstable bridge leading to the vein. He tries to gather some good ideas. Try to slowly walk over. No, too risky. Use some string to possibly grapple your way over. No the string wont support my weight. Use a slime ball on your hands to stick to the rocks. No, i would be stuck to whatever rock i grabbed onto. After all those ideas I made my decision. " I've gotten enough loot for today. Why risk my life for some diamonds when I can find more elsewhere?" He decides to be safe and head back up the cave to safer ground.

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer: Segavex has had a very rough day mining and digging. He sighs in relief as he sips the cold ale in his mug. Segavex looks over and spots a rather young dwarf crying to himself. As Segavex moves to talk to the dwarf he spots two others in the corner Whispering and pointing consistently at the dwarf. Segavex watches them carefully. Just as he moves to comfort the dwarf, the two in the corner start to walk the young dwarf's way. He notices that the both of them do not have very happy looks on their faces and one has a dagger at hand. Segavex moves to intercept them. "I assume you are not going to by the lad an ale? Says Segavex. "Ye move aside, before we slice yer tongue off". The one with the dagger says as he tries to brush past. Segavex quickly grabs his throat and carries him to the nearest wall as fast and quiet as possible. The other dwarf watches in Awe as he carry him. "Attempt to scream or yell and ill slice "yer" throat." I say mocking him. "Now. You two will peacefully walk out that tavern door and never come near me or this lad again." Says Segavex. "Do I need to..carve it into your head? Says Segavex as he puts the knife to the dwarfs forehead. "N- No! No ye kind sir! W-we won't bother the wee lad or ye self! We promise ye!" Segavex puts the dwarf down and the both of them scramble to the door. He moves to the young dwarf and tries to cheer him up by buying him an ale and talking to him for a while.

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

Answer: Segavex has had an amazing day mining. He makes his way up the caverns of Kalos when he heres a voice call to him. “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!” He turns smiling, walking towards the dwarf. "That sounds fantastic." Says Segavex. "Ill pour ye a cup then shall I?" Segavex sips the ale and smiles at the fresh taste of it. "very ref-" He is cut off as he is surrounded by 4 other dwarves battle axes in hand. "Now, ye will hand over all yer riches and walk away." Segavex says nothing and stares at the dwarf. "Alrighty my mate, yer loss." The dwarf nods to a dwarf behind Segavex and he hears him stepping up. Just as He turns around an Axe comes at a striking speed towards his forehead. The dwarf stumbles and falls at the weight of his Axe. "Now my chance to get away from these lads!" Segavex thought. He looked down and noticed some Redstone dust on the ground of the cavern. He quickly picks up the dust as the dwarves are advancing and throws it at their heads. The dwarves yell as the Redstone stings their eyes. Segavex runs out of the cavern safely with all his things and no injuries.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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Hello! After reading through your application I've decided to deny it for the following reasons:

 

• You did not post on the Minecraftforums. Here is the link  http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-anthos-officially-t-h-e-1-roleplay-server/
• Your biography sounds more like an Open Response Question. Add some things about your character's childhood. If you are unsure how to, you can always look at someone else's application, but remember, don't plagiarise.
• Please add some lore to your biography, you only briefly mentioned Kal'Karik. Here is a link to the wiki to help you out! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/ 

 

Overall, a very nice first try!

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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