[Denied][Elf] Slash9239's Application

[NomadGaia 930]

Minecraft Account Name: xXVenomCastXx

 How old are you?:13

 Time-Zone: Mountain Time

 Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I roleplay Every Day. Its just so much fun! I play skyrim and my friends think I have really cool ideas and I play WOW

 How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: My Bros.

 Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:

 

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84576-slash9239s-lotc-application/

 

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84804-slash9239s-elf-application/

 Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):(Sorry My Planet minecraft dosn't work does that make it deny me?)

 Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes.

 

Role-playing: Playing a world that Allows you to be someone you want to be in said universe.Even the Smallest Charecters have a role.
(Example: The Yogscast Shadow of Israphel Series.)

 Meta-gaming: The Use of Knowledge from a past life being used in this life to guide your character. To use something Mental that you had in a previous life.
(Example: Hey Guys I know a Shortcut I used it When I was a dwarf. Let's Go use it!)
 
Power-emoting: The use of emotes in a way that takes away the ability for a person to react. It is usually used with Villinous acts.
(Example: *John Pickpockets Steven.)

 

Full Name: AngelFire Sylvari

 Current Age: 350

 Race: Elf

 Sub-race (if any): High Elf

 Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):My Parents Died In an Orc Raid when I was 13. I

 

am a good fisher. I also Crafted Jewelry with my Mother. I can Read and Write. But I can Sing Like An

 Angel. I Love making Friends. Occasionally I Explore. My Parents visited Sylvenor once a human seed.They would

 

bring back Delicious apples. My Mothers Main Magic Class is the Way of the Shaman. She had an Iron Staff with a

 

wither Skull on both ends. Also my Mother once experimented with random spells and turned my Eyes Green. My

 

Parents used to Take me To  Nature's Boon All the time because they knew it was my Favorite Festival. My Father

 

Came Down With Ki'katta When he was 863.

             

   AngelFire Was a  Bright girl. She lived in Haelun'or With her parents Sweaka and Silkela. Her dad Sweaka was a

 gifted hunter. Her Mother Silkea was a fine craftswoman. The Day AngelFire Found Her Parents Dead and changed her

 

forever. She had been In the woods Just Exploring. But After Investigating She Found out it was the Hideout of A group

 of High Elf bandits. This Was Very strange To her, Because her parents Told her all the elves were Friendly people. They Saw her And chased her So she Hurried home after she lost them to tell her Parents About the Bandit camp. But when she got home The bandits got

 

to her house first. She first Saw her mother Stabbed with her Own Staff in the chest. then she found her Father He had 13 arrows across his body. Her Father's Dying words were "Live in ArmaLuna its safe there, Sweetie I love You". She Was

 

Devastated. She did the only thing she new how to do. Find help. While she was running through the trees she tripped on a

 

log and cut her back on a log. So After that She Jumped on a boat When she Was About 260 To go from Anthos To Asulon..

 

Ambitions for the Future: I want to be a bard. I wish to settle down in ArmaLuna. Possibly Get married.

 

Personality: Friendly, Curious, Helpful, Fun-loving, and Adventurous.

 Skills: Fishing, Singing, Dancing. I am skilled with a Sil. I also know how to use a berr fairly well.

 Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): green eyes platinum hair, tan skin, and a green dress.

 

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: I get distracted easily. I am Nimble. I have A Large Scar
Going Down My Back.

 

 

 1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?

 Answer: I walk up to the group and say "Fools, you would go so low as to mock a defensless child?. What more could I expect From you Blathering Idiots" Then One of The Elves turned Around. He said " Well Boys We'd Better teach this Little Peasent A Few Lessons About Respect!" So One of them Charges At me with a knife.I Un-Sheath My Sword And Get in my defensive stance. The Elf Curves to the Left when I was Expecting a Right Attack. I try to Quicky Correct my stance. But it was too Late. He Cut my Side. Deep. So I Charge Back I slide When His stance was For a straight on attack.
I slice one of his legs Open. He Screams in pain and then says " IM GOUNNA GET YOU, YOU PEST.". Driven By rage, His first mistake, He Swang his Knife at me Futily. I Parried his knife with my sword. And cut his stomach. Then I hear the Wizz of an arrow just in time to dodge it. Then the Elf Shoots 3 Arrows in Rapid succesion. One Hits My arm. I scream. Then I Pick Up A stone And Split it in two with another rock
Then I Chuck one At his head And the Other at his Bow. He Easily Dodges Them. But while he was Distracted I Pulled Out my Bow And Shot 4 arrows in rapid succesion. The first one hit him in the Throat the next didnt hit. The third got his leg and the Fourth Also didnt hit. The last one Pulled His Sil Out. So we Circled around each other. I Struck quickly but not quickly enough. He parred my Blow And Struck my Shoulder cutting off some skin. Then Whilst I was Recovering He Strikes me On the head with the handle. While im recovering from that he picks me up by the neck and
slams me against a tree. While hes choking me I Pull out my dagger and stab his neck. He staggers backwards and then I pick Up my Sil and Put it against his throat. I whisper to him "I Win, That enough Of a Lesson For you."(I know its out of lore but My character is Extremely Hostile towords Bad Wood Elves.)  Then I walk Over to the Wood Elf .I Bend down and ask the wood elf if Shes alright. She Looks at me and Stammers " I... Im Okay...." Then I Send her home and Nurse my wounds. I put some bandages around my Stomach and my arms. Then I begin To realize the Pain im in because the Adreniline Wore off. I stagger away hoping not to get involved with anything else.

 2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

Answer:I help him up. I pick up his coins and put them in his pack. Then I Pick up his walking stick and give it to him. Then I take a bit of food and some money from my pack and put them in his pack. He Then insists I don't do anymore for him. He says Ive done enough.  Then a turtle walks by. We then have a small conversation about turtles.(Remember I get Distracted easily.) He says "I once had a pet turtle. His name Was Athelius." I say " I love Turtles. they Are so Peaceful". He says " Well I must be going Thank'ye for this Act of Charity and kindness.". Finnaly I wave him goodbye and he waves back and Bows.  Then I send him on his way.

 3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer:I walk up then He hurries me over and asks me why im out here all by my lonesome. I tell him I dont have parents then he says he sorry and says "Ill tell you what, Ill Give you one thing out of my cart for free." So I look through the cart and Spot a book and quill. I say ill take the book and quill. He Asks me "Can You write?" I say no. Then he spends a bunch of time teaching me writing Basics of Writing. " No no You have the L the wrong way. Do it like this" I say "sorry its just I need to get to Armaluna My Dad told me to Go there with his dying breath".

The Friendly Shopkeeper Frowns Sympatheticly And then he teaches me the rest of the Alphabet .Lastly I buy some food and supplies like bread and leather. He asks for 15 Minas. I manage to take it down to 9 minas.

 

 

 

Other Questions: If I were a Bard Would I have to Write my own songs? Also If there's a song on YouTube may I link it in like a book?

 

 

Also May I have two Professions? Bard And Writer.

 

 

 

For an Extra I put in a Poem I would write in LOTC:

 

Over The Hill,

 

Across the Valley,

 

Lay a Silent Sleeping Willow,

 

 

It gives to thee,

 

Who Gives to it,

 

A Fountain,

 

A Bird,

 

A Stone.

 

This is the Tale of the Sleeping Willow.

 

Sorry My Skin screenshot is Always too much of a file size However I can Give you a Link to it on the Skindex.

 

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1174482/pasty-skined-elf/

 

Thanks for reading And I hope you Accept!

 

[Queen of Aegis 174]

 

- powergaming definition is wrong

- High elves can't be shaman's only orcs

- AngelFire isn't a name, plese choose something that fits a high elf somewhat more

- Dead parents is overused, please try something more original

- With 13 arrows in your body, you won't be able to speak even a word to someone. You would be dead

- 1st ORQ contains heavy powergaming, I suggest you look up what powergaming really means

- 2nd ORQ; There are no turtles in LotC 

- 2nd ORQ lacks dialog

- 3rd ORQ is too short

 

You may reapply 24 hours after this post

 

If you have any questions feel free to PM me

 

~BoomBox~

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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