[Denied]Whitelist Application For Lotc [Elf] 3Rd Attempt

[bubbykaz 0]

 

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name:Darkhoneydew

How old are you?:27

Time-Zone:GMT-5

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:Yes I have done alot of forum roleplays

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:Google Mainly

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.lordofthe...n-for-lotc-elf/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/81624-whitelist-application-for-lotc-elf-2ed-try/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):Yes

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing:The act of playing your char has if you where in his or her shoes. like say if you were Joe a elf mage you would have to give him a personality,likes dislikes,strengths ect.

Meta-gaming:The use of OOC info IC for a advantage.Like if you hear about a camp you cant raid it because you cant know about it but you do so anyways

Power-emoting:Overpowered use of Emotes I.E Joey stabs and kills mono.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name:Yenama Casapa

Current Age:32

Sub-race (if any):Wood Elf

Past / History:Yenama Is a wood elf from the tavern village ShadowVale on a Black Moon she thought that because of this odd time of birth she had a Crimson eye (Left) and a Violet eye(Right) but in fact it was just Heterochromia Yenama gained her crimson eye from her lost dark elf father. She was also arachnaphobic and was born messing with bows so she knew how to work them and she was good at hiding too so she became a hunter for the village.While Yenama was growing up she was taught archery,brewing,swordsmanship,and stealth.She was told about how the world was created and about the Anguls and Deamons she became interested but dabble into it no longer because every year her mother would bring her to join her in the Great Hunt Yenama learned the vital points of most Fauna of the area.

 

When Yenama left home at age 17 she got a package before she left. It was from her mom it was a bow,12 arrows,and 10 Minas after she left she found a human in a forest she introduced her self. and he told her his name was Maxwell they departed and left she made a tree house in a forest near by ShadowVale and spent her times learning  more how to brew and perfected her archery she left to adventure and to become a great archer when she was 25.When she became 30 she built a poison that was able to slow a heart beat to simulate death for 40 seconds but she could only make 1 bottle because it consumes some of the rarest ingredients she could find in her area and when she was 33 she left out of the forest and into ShadowVale and said goodbye to the residents has she walked into the wild.

Ambitions for the Future:To become a great archer and adventure the unknown areas of Asulon.

Personality:Kind,caring,unselfish,and bold

Skills:Archery,stealth,and brewing

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your ski n):http://s1292.photobucket.com/user/bubbykaz/media/2013-02-08_224152_zps1f7a309c.png.html

Any other details you wish to share about your character:None

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?

 

Answer:Yenama heard whispering and investigated only to see  some high elves mocking a small wood elf girl "Stop that!" she said to the High Elves "You don't have the right to do that and just because you are 'royal' doesn't mean you have the right to mock her!"When the high elves leave she walks up to the child and asks "Where are your parents?"The child responds with "I don't know i got lost they were heading to ShadowVale I think."Yemana walk the child to ShadowVale to be greeted by her parents all rewards she was offered she refused from Minas to a vase she did not want them because she saw they were poor.

 

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

 

Answer:Yemana saw a man fall over walking stick broken and Minas on the floor she  stops and grabs the Minas of the ground and put it in a pouch "come on do you know where the closest city is sir?"She said to the man picking him up."to the north east there is a town I was heading to."She quickly walked the man there at first sight of a place that sold walking sticks."Hello? I want to buy a walking stick."She said entering"Ahh yes I was about to close down this shop anyways that will cost you 20 Minas."Yemana took out her pouch and got 10 Minas from it "Here you go"She said to the owner of the place has she was handed the walking stick she went to the old man and gave him the walking stick and his Minas before she walked away.

 

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A tradoster stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

 

Answer:Yemana heard a man call her over "Welcome Welcome! we sell everything you could want."The man said "Do you sell a Enchanted bow?" She Said "Why yes! we have one that imbues your arrows with fire setting them ablaze!" "Well I will sell this sword and this enchanted pendent for 200 Minas and I will give you 100 minas for 300 Minas for that bow." "No no no I require a better payment 500 Minas!" "No way! I will buy it for 355 Minas."She said taking out a potion." "Fine. here take it!" Yemana grabbed forcefully the bow  and walked away back,angry at the salesman, to the Elven Forest.

 

 

[ski_king3 0]

Under Review

 

 

You did not change your power-emoting definition as was requested previously. Expand on it, as it is very vague and not entirely correct.

 

You didn't do much to your bio. The part you added about the poison you created I would say is not good. We have some fairly specific alchemy lore, and I would prefer if you learnt it in game rather than just started out knowing how to make it. Rather than having her be skilled in alchemy (what you called brewing, but really it is alchemy), I would suggest making her an aspiring alchemist, that way you can learn through roleplay. Also, saying she "was born messing with bows" makes me think she has been using them since the day she was born. I'd edit that, as obviously a newborn baby or even a toddler cannot use a bow. Other than that, expand on your bio a bit more, and you should be good to go.

 

Also, expand on your ORQ's a little more. You didn't change them at all. Add more detail to your responses to the last three questions, and you should be good to go.

 

You're still really close, you just need to address the things which were mentioned in your previous denial.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply in 24 hours.

[ski_king3 0]

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