[Denied]Chris22228's Application (Dwarf)

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Minecraft Account Name: chris22228

How old are you?:14 almost 15

Time-Zone: est time NA

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes i agree and will follow them without hesitation. 

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played on MANY different role play servers and have had lots of experience.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a good role-play server and i found you guys. =D

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:None

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):Not yet but will soon.

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: When you take up a certain role in a game and become the character pretty much having a whole new life.

Meta-gaming: When you use ooc information ic.

Power-emoting:I know it best as power-gaming but i think they are the same. It's when you force an action/emote upon a player example: John swipes his sword at the man and cuts his head off then automatically kills a whole army of orcs with his fists.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Avilin_Ironmane

Current Age: 19

Sub-race (if any): Cave Dwarf

Clan (if any): None

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Avilin was born on a small farm stand with no siblings and two parents. He had hopes of becoming a successful farmer like his father but soon learned that farming was tiring and grueling work. He was also a very curious child and even invented a grip on his fathers hoe so it wouldn't give his father splinters. His family had to move out of the farm since the animals there were getting into there crops to much and there were wolves and such lurking in the woods. Avilin was five at the time when his family  moved to the very border of  Urguan.

   14 years later....

 Avilin was bored one day when he was sitting in a pile of hay looking at the clouds and thought to himself 'Hey...Why am i wasting my life here while i could be on a adventure. He told his parents about his idea and the shook their heads at first but realized that the young boy was grown up. So they gave him some food and money and he set off.  He soon found himself at the huge doors of a dwarf mountain.

   

Ambitions for the Future: To explore the new lands in hope of settling down, with a family.

Personality: A trustworthy man with a warm heart he is very curious and hopes to live on a farm one day.

Skills: Fast thinking, quick witted, Strong,nice and mean when threatened,

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):  

Any other details you wish to share about your character:None

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

 

Answer: Avilin looks at the rock bride and says to himself 'I know what to do! i can go get some wood from the other dwarfs and we can build a bridge there!'.

 

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

 

Answer:Avilin rushes out of his seat and runs at the men, Hurdling himself at the man with the knife. Avilin gets bruised at little but attempts to get the dagger out of the mans hand. The other men in the Tavern realize what the two men were going to do to the Boy and help Avilin.

 

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

 

Answer:You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react? Avilin smiles and happily takes the mug of ale and pays the man. He takes his seat with a warm smile on his face.

[Peter Chivay 2494]

 

For the following reasons:

 

1. I would like to see you go more in depth on your definitions, I can tell you get them but I would really like to see proof that you do.

 

2. The Lore in your application is extremely short, you only mentioned Uragan once. Please be sure to use more than that to prove that you have read the server lore. Use important places, people, etc. 

 

3. Lastly, your ORQs are a bit short. Try to expand on them. Don't be afraid to demonstrate your RP ability!

[Peter Chivay 2494]

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