[Denied]Booklight12's Application

[Booklight12 481]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Main Account Name: booklight12
Alternate Account Name:
How old are you?: 16
Time-Zone: eastern standard
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: about 2 months worth of experience

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: to play a role or character in game
Meta-gaming: Using ooc information icly when your character doesnt know it
Power-emoting: Forcing action upon another player

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:
Full Name: Blake
Current Age: 20
Race: Human
Sub-race (if any):
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Blake was born in the wilderness with his parents. He started off as a kind lad, he and his parents the bloodwolfs lived happily with the wolves of the area. They lived in the middle of a pack of wolves territory you see. He lived a simple yet lavish life in the woods. It was all good until the wolves became frantic. One night in the pitch black dark the wolves came to his camp and killed his parents. he was only about 5 then so he didnt really know much of the world. The wolfs took him as their own and he lived with them for 10 years after. He lived with them and eventually became the alpha of the pack, and ruled the forest as his own. This lifestyle was good for a while until he saw another human female of the same age. Her name was jennifer and the second he laid his wolfen eyes on her he was madly in love. The woman was a beutiful blonde woman with sliky white skin. The womans parents were hunters and one night on their daily hunting routine, they came across Blakes pack. This ended quickly and in great succession her parents killed every living member of Blakes pack. In a rage He had ran up to the parents and made quick work of them tearing them to shreds and eating parts of their bodies for meat. When Jennifer found out about this she suddenly got a shot in her brain and jumped off a bridge into a waterfall and drowned.

  It has been 4 years since that day and Blake has not let her or his pack go. He had many attempts of suicide all failing. He was in a great deep deppression for a while until he found a White Wolf of the name Rasputin. Blake spoke to this wolf he thought he was insane and just imagining this wolf was speaking to him, but Blake felt rasputin in his heart. This wolf taught him how to live again and brought him to many great cities and taught Blake to interact with other humans and beings. Rasputin also taught Blake that everyone is equal. That is why to this day, Blake will trust anyone he comes across, its a great quality but may cost him his life in the future. Also, Blake never thinks of others as bad people, only people with bad pasts. He lived with rasputin for about 3 years but sadly Rasputin had passed away as a very very old wolf. Blake when Rasputin died promised to make  name for himself and fight for others in glory, and to forge alliances on his new journeys in this land. Blake may succeed or fail but he will try his hardest to help the innocent and rise above others as a leader.

Ambitions for the Future: Wishes to become king, or have a very high position as a military leader or hero.
Personality: Calm normally, he tries to keep his anger down and is very laid back and a bit of a ladies man. but dont let that fool you because if you wrong him you will see his sadistic side where he can tear you and your entire family to shreds without feeling any guilt (only if he is deeply angered by someone)
Skills: Great at combat, and is a great hunter and user of the swords, he usually fights with one tomahawk and sword, or two tomahawks. Is minor chef, but he is very smart and charming.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Has white hair, one blue one red eye due to an accident as a child. white skin, Is about 6 foot, lean and very muscular due to living in the woods his entire life. wears a rasputins wolf pelt on his back at all times to keep him with him always.
Any other details you wish to share about your character: Nope

 

[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Uponinspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: Blake walks up to the group "Oi, get away from the lad blokes, before you rip ye all te shreds"

one of the elves say "Ha, I would like te see you try 4 against one we would easily defeat you fool.

Blake snarls at them and begins to growl and speak in a menacing demonic voice "I said leave him alone or i will cut yer tongues out and feed them to the Wolves here" another one of the older elves is a bit scared "Woah, what happened to yer voice lad I dont want any trouble" Blake begins to growl somemore before pulling out his bone knife "I said leave before i gut ye, now scram" The group of elves run of terrified by blake.

 

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. Hecollapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there,defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

 

Answer: Blake walks up to the man sympathetically and tries to help him up "Are ye okay sir? I dont want an elderly man to get harmed" 

"No, no i'm fine just leave me be" Blake picks up the mans coins and hands it to the man

"You dont look it sir, here I'll help ye out, where were ye going?"

"Oh your a kind young lad, a normal person in these times would just take my coins and leave, thank you I was just heading down that road to my cottage why dont you accompany me"

Blake follows the old ma helping him down the forest to his cottage.

 

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

 

Answer:

 

Blake: "Here can i have that fine piece of venison?"

Man: "Oh this is the finest piece of meat we have It will cost 50 minas"

Blake: "50 minas?! No sir i will give you 4 gold pieces for the meat."

Man: "Ho ho you drive a hard bargain, I will give it to you for 30 minas"

Blake: "6 minas i will give you"

Man: "16 minas and you have  a deal" *man smiles*

Blake: *laughs in his face* "Do you take me for a daft fool? I will do it for 3 minas and that is final no more"

Man: "Okay okay 10 minas"

Blake: growls and looks menacing "3. minas. I said"

Man: looks scared "okay okay 3 minas take the meat just please leave me be"

Blake: *smiles* "Thank you"

Man: *hands blake the piece of meat*

Blake: *Takes the meat and puts the minas on the table*

[IrishPerson 693]

~Under Review~

 

 

 

 

Sadly your application has been denied, the reasons are as follows:

 

• Your definitions are too short and need more detail. Perhaps an example on each of them.
• I would like to see a better bio. Being raised by wolves would more then likely not happen.
• Your ORQ's are too short and need more detail in them. Please work on them.
• You also need to add a screenshot of your skin.

 

 

 

Please wait at least a full twenty four hours as of this post's edit (seen below) before posting your next attempt. If you have any questions, feel free to send me a message. Good luck with your next application.

Edited April 20, 2013 by MrGreene

[IrishPerson 693]

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