[Denied][Dwarf] Qiwimarvin

[QiwiMarvin 2]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: QiwiMarvin
How old are you?: 17
Time-Zone: UTC/GMT +4 hours
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I've played on iRolePlay Server(one of the best russian role play servers)
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I tried to found role play server for me and my friend and found your server by video on youtube.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-anthos-officially-t-h-e-1-roleplay-server/page__st__2940#entry22184740
Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes, of course 

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: For me it's like playing in a theater. You choose a role for yourself, get used to it. All your actions, emotions must match the role.
Meta-gaming: This information is not getting through acting out our roles.
Power-emoting: It is not realistic behavior. For example, my dwarf will not enter into battle with the superior forces of the enemy.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Jansen Bralson
Current Age: 113
Sub-race (if any): Forest Dwarf
Clan (if any): None
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Born in the small settlement of forest dwarves. My father was a fisherman and his mother was a small kitchen garden near the house. From childhood he was prepared to continue the business of his father. But he was not satisfied with this state of affairs. And at the age of 60, he left home.
After wandering around the world for many years after returning home, he discovers that his father died from a severe illness, and his mother is no longer able to deal with the economy. He decides to help her mother and takes over farm and his fathers business.

20 years later his mother died. Relatives in the city he was no more and decides to leave home. By selling the house he hits the road. Stayed in small hotels, avoided the big cities, he went to the mountains. As a child, he looked at them and see the wood at their feet and dreamed of one day to go there. And such a possibility given the Janssen.

At this point the story ends, what happens next is up to you.

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Ambitions for the Future: My goal in life is to become a lumberjack and make a contribution to the history of the dwarves
Personality: loner, gloomy, brooding
Skills: Has a penchant for fishing and farming
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://imgur.com/P4N9mRp
Any other details you wish to share about your character: 

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?[/b]

Answer: Janssen will hold all day in thought how to move to the other side.(The only thing I can not understand is what will make the forest a dwarf in a mine?)

[b]2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?[/b]

Answer: Janssen loner and problems of other people did not care much, it will not interfere with what is happening. (As I said, Janssen does not like noisy places, then what was he doing in the tavern?)

[b]3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: Janssen does not like noisy places and tries to avoid the dangers, he believes that the free cheese can be only in a mousetrap. It will continue its journey without paying attention to the greeter.

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Clarify Meta-gaming and Power-emoting definitions, they're unclear. More information can be found on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Please add server lore such as events, dates or diseases to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Explain in the bio how he learned his skills.

Expand on all the Open Response Questions and add dialogue to the last two. Even though it might be unrealistic for your character to be in these scenarios, try and think of a reason why he would be. Perhaps he was kidnapped and taken there, or wandered in accidentally.


A good first attempt.

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