[Denied][Dwarf] Qiwimarvin

[QiwiMarvin 2]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please
fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and
ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft
Account Name: QiwiMarvin
How old are you?: 17
Time-Zone: UTC/GMT
+4 hours
Have
you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous
experience have you had in role-playing?: I've played on iRolePlay
Server(one of the best russian role play servers)
How did you hear
about the the Lord of the Craft?: I tried to found role play server
for me and my friend and found your server by video on youtube.
Link
any applications that you have previously made for the server:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/87120-dwarf-qiwimarvin/
Have
you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then
please do so (link
above): http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-anthos-officially-t-h-e-1-roleplay-server/page__st__2940#entry22201107
Have
you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it
and follow it in your biography?: Yes, of course 

Definitions
In
your own words define the following terms. Do not take any
definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:
For me it's like playing in a theater. You choose a role for
yourself, get used to it. All your actions, emotions must match the
role.
Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming
is to use the information obtained, not by acting out my
role.
Power-emoting: This
is the performance of acts that are not realistic. For example: a
knight in heavy armor will not jump into the water, or a simple
farmer will not engage in combat with criminals, but rather to pay
off from them or run away.
In-Character
Information:
Complete
the following biography on your character:

Full
Name: Jansen Bralson
Current Age: 113
Sub-race (if any): Forest
Dwarf
Clan (if any): None
Past / History (include
childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

    I
was born in a small village at the foot of the mountains. My father
was a fisherman. The mother was a housewife. Also I had a grandmother
who told me stories about my great-great grandfather who fought in
the Battle of the Sands. Since childhood, I was a loner. Did not like
the big companies, and my circle of friends consisted of Garth's my
dog ​​and two neighborhood kids. As a child, my father used to
take me fishing, because of this I have become very good fisherman.
He wanted me to continue his work, but I did not like it. I do not
know what I wanted to do, but I was sure that the fish until the end
of time is not my destiny. I'll tell you a story from my childhood,
which has turned the ordinary course of things.

    When
I had a free minute I ran to a nearby yard to play with the neighbor
kids. We played four of us: me, Garth, and two neighborhood kids. We
decided to go to a nearby grove of trees and play hide and seek
there. I played hide and seek very well, I've always found a good
place to hide, this talent often helped me in the future. We played
for about an hour, when they noticed that Garth's not around.
Usually, he ran around the area until we played, after I called him
and together we ran to the house. But at that time he did not answer.
My friends decided to help me in finding him. We searched the woods,
but it was not there. It was beginning to get dark. In the distance,
beyond the grove, we saw the glow over the hill. Crept closer, we
found that it is staying overnight travelers. We decided to ask them
if they had seen Garth. We came to the camp. Coming closer, we found
that the mysterious travelers armed. Then we realized that it's not
just travelers, but it was too late. They grabbed my friends and have
been rushed to me, but I was able to react and run away. I was
ashamed of my behavior. I thought a lot about how in my place would
have done the other dwarf. For example <Darain Blackaxe>
(second Grand Tournament Champion). I do not think he would have
escaped. I returned home after midnight. That night all the men of
the village are able to hold a gun went in search of the bandits, but
they found no one. This story will forever remain in my memory. The
story of my shame.

After
this history I was even more withdrawn into myself
and became a loner. After my parents died(they
died of plague), I sold the paternal house and hit the road.

 

At
this point the story ends, what happens next is up to you.

Ambitions for the Future: Find
yourself in this life and to remove the burden of shame from my
shoulders. I
want to take part in the Great Hunt. I also want to keep a diary of
my adventures.
Personality:
loner, gloomy, brooding
Skills: My
main skills are stealth and fishing
Appearance (this must
include an in-game
screenshot of your skin): http://imgur.com/P4N9mRp
Any other
details you wish to share about your
character: 

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section
must be answered with a
minimum of one paragraph which must describe
the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore
at any point.

____
 

1. Whilst mining
deep in the
undergrounds of Kalos you
see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine
you are on. There is a
very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but
it is the
only way to access the deposit. What do you do?[/b]

Answer: 

While
traveling through the caves, I once found a diamond deposits on the
other side of the gorge. Cross over to the other side could only be
on thin and unstable bridge of stone. Realizing that cross the bridge
I can not cross I decided drew in charcoal on the ceiling and broke
the bridge. I returned to the same spot the next day, with a long
solid oak board. Hooking the board through the gorge, and took off
his backpack. I went to the board and crawled to the other side.
After moving to the other side, I realized that I forgot to pick on
the other side. Going back with a pick I found a very unpleasant
surprise: it was not the deposits of precious diamonds, it turned out
that it gleamed so vsegolish lapis lazuli from my torch. Of course, I
was upset, but lapis lazuli is better than nothing. I decided to sell
it to the jeweler in the nearest town.

2. You are
sitting in the local tavern with a
large pint of ale in your
hand - sitting nearby you is a
rather young dwarf whom is clearly
going through a bad time. He is crying
to himself, and clutching
a small wooden hammer toy. In the
other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to
each other and pointing
occasionally at the dwarf. They stand
up, one with a
small dagger in his
hand and beginto
approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer:
 

"Hey,
kid, do not want to treat the two hard workers after a hard day?",
uttered one of the gnomes.

"I
do not think so", replied the young dwarf.

"But
my friend did not agree with that", said the second dwarf.

 

    Jansen
left the table, and immediately left the tavern. Out on the street
Janssen called the nearest guard. Briefly explaining the guard
situation in the tavern. Together with the guard returned to the
tavern. It was not too late. For two bullies guards appearance was a
surprise and diminished his ardor they immediately left the tavern.
Young
dwarf thanked the unknown savior unpretentious conversation over a
mug ale. This story reminded Janssen story from his childhood, but
this time he has helped and prevented a terrible end.


3. Whilst wandering
through the Dwarven Caverns you
hear a voice call out to
you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere
n’get ye’rself
an ale!”. You spin
on your heel and see
a heavily bearded bar-owner
looking at you - a
huge grin on his face, and a
mug of ale in his
hand. How do you
react?

Answer: 

"Greetings
to you, of course I do not mind a drink of ale for free"

 

    Janssen
went to the tavern. The tavern was empty and bleak. Burned a
fireplace in the middle of a large hall and a candle at the bar.
Innkeeper spent Janssen to a place in the corner. And he gave a huge
mug of ale. In the circle there were at least two pints of ale. After
drinking ale Janssen felt his eyelids lowered eyes. And he fell
asleep immediately.
 

    He
woke up too late at night (when he went to the tavern, it was noon).
The first thing he realized that he had cut the purse and disappeared
inherited from a great-great grandfather's sword scabbard (Janssen
wore a simple iron sword which costs
5
minas)

[Mystery 118]

Denied,

 

Please fix your definitions they are all wrong.

 

Your bio has no lore in it.

 

You need to take your time with the application.

 

Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

[Mystery 118]

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