[Denied][Dwarf] Cheapgoblin

[Cheapgoblin 0]

[Lita 677]

• Your definitions need a lot of work, expand upon what each thing means, especially to you. Examples are a major help.
• Include more server lore in your biography.
• You did not fill out the skills question.
• Please expand upon your ORQs, making sure to write them like a story with detail and dialogue.
• Your grammar needs some work.

Please remember to wait 24 hours after this message is edited before reapplying, and feel free to PM me with any questions.

Edited May 25, 2013 by {Mentor} Escharian
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[Lita 677]

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