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Princeton 396 Share Posted May 28, 2013 -- - Unfortunately, I am going to have to deny this - Your definitions need to be heavily expanded upon. Add an example and a proper definition to prove your knowledge. In a biography, your character is not allowed to be a noble or of any noble descent. I suggest taking that part out of your application and re-fitting it. You must also add official LoTC server lore in your biography. You can find information on dwarves in the dwarven role-play sub-forum. Your ORQ's were lacking detailed dialogue and thought out actions. You should include dialogue in your ORQ's to prove you know how to properly RP. Please wait 24 hours after this denial to reapply. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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