[Denied]Application For Alfar Thornbrige

[Alfar Thornbrige 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Main Account adam_797

Alternate Account Name: None.

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone:GMT+2

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:yes i have and i completaley comply with them

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:I have played on a lot of RPG servers such as Massivecraft but never with whitlist.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing:It is when people imagen a ficional place or world and control the story and caracters.

Meta-gaming:Meta-gaming is when a caracter uses his knowledge about the game and influence your actions in a unsporting manna, wich is knowledge you do not have. 

Power-emoting:Power-emoting is when you do something unbeliveble and it is also a act of doing something in the game and does not give time for other players time to respond.

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name:Alfar Oakfall

Current Age:24

Race:Human

Sub-race (if any):Northender 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):He was born in the cold morning 

of winter,on a farm in the woods. Alfar often worked on the farm, where he mainly cut wood for a living. Alfar would help his dad and play with his dog and brother

by the river. But one day when he was just 11 a group of  green , mercyless orcs atacked his farthers farm, Alfar hid in the hollow tree with his younger brother.

They heard screams of pain and dispere coming from outside, but they could do nothing. Two days later Alfar crawled out of the hollow tree which had given him protection.

 To his joy he saw his mother, and father, scraped but alive sitting on the porch, but his younger brother had not made it through the 2 cold, windy nights.

After he buried his young brother, Alfar made a decision that he would have to leave his home and find his feet in the world.

 

He gathered all his things and left to seek destiny. Alfar lived in a little wooden house for 2 months when one sudden day a man dressed in black robes named Lysian the Bold offered him to take Alfar to the temple of light 

not far away and trained him from the age of 12 to 18 how to survive and stay hidden, and most of all how to fight, with a bow and sword. After that 

he was done learning he left for the city to seek his destiny.

Ambitions for the Future:To find his destiny in life and maby become a greate warrior

Personality:Funny, strong heated, wise and creative but sort temperd

Skills:fighting, wise, good at hiding and bows for he was trained for years with one.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): this is where my skin is:

http://www.minecraft.../archer-hunter/

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

He started out small but so do all great things, he has a strong sense in his heart, and the will power to succeed, Alfar Oakfall will not fall.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

 

Answer:Alfar silently withdraws his bow. -Aims at this Hidden Figure- Having Second thoughts he withdraws his bow creeping up to the figure. THe hooded man notices Alfar apporoaching starting to break into a sprint. Alfar Screams to the hooded figure "You Walk another step and it shall be your last" The figure rebelliosly steps again. In an instant Alfar takes aim and fires, hitting the target dead on, as usual, before running into the cold alley ways.

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

 

Answer:I am on my way to the city when i see two bandits threatening a old man, I think to my self I must help him i pull out a arrow and I get ready to soot, but i lean forward and a stick snaps under my foot . the bandits hear me and look at me, but i am too quick i shoot one of them in the head and killed him, the other one runs at me and i get a arrow out again, b ut just before i shoot the old man had hit him on the back of the head with a branch. the old man comes to me and thanks me and hands a bag of coins to me as a reward.

 

 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

 

Answer:I would approach the stall and complement him on his colourful stall and ask how much the arrows and iron is.

He replies "thank you very much, and the arrows are 50minas for 30 and the iron is 50 for 12 ignots."

"50minas for 30 arrows thats i high prise that man over there is selling 50 for 40 minas and 60 minas for 20 iron."  I reply.

In shock the man replies to me in a worried voice "O please don't buy from him I am near loosing my house and my shop, please I give you both for 60 minas."

I smile and say "Now thats a good price, I will take it."

[Princeton 396]

Denied

- Unfortunately, I am going to have to deny this -

Firstly, your biography is extremely cliche and very overused. I suggest referring to this guide: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/86970-parent-killing-orcs-and-other-cliches-to-avoid/

Attempt to come up with a more unique application that separates you apart from others.

Lastly, your ORQ's striked me as a bit powegamey. Firstly, you cannot simply shoot a shady looking man simply because he looks shady. That would require a villain application for unprovoked murder. Also, don't consider yourself an expert of any weapon without learning in-game once you're accepted. I would suggest adding detailed actions and dialogue to support the situation.

Please wait 24 hours after this post to reapply. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns!

[Princeton 396]

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