ski_king3 0 Share Posted June 19, 2013 You must post your application to the Minecraft Forum Post. Your definition for meta-gaming was not exactly correct. I would look at this wiki page and read the section on meta-gaming at the very least, as it should help you. There are a few problems with your bio as well. For one, I'd like to see you separate your bio into multiple paragraphs, as it is rather hard to read big walls of text like that. Also, having your character be orphaned as yours essentially is is very cliche. While I would advise you change that, it is not totally necessary. And a person who can navigate almost anywhere inexplicably does not make much sense to me. You should explain how your character was so skilled at finding things. This made little sense to me as well. Also, it is not very realistic for two dwarves to visit the orc clans, as they would likely be killed. However, I am very impressed by the amount of lore you used in this bio. It just needs some work. As far as your skin goes, it is fine in and of itself, however, I would advise editing it to remove the crown. Just a suggestion, but it would be rather odd for some random dwarf to have a crown, you know? Your ORQ's were fairly good in content, they just need to be expanded a bit, mostly the second and third, but the first as well. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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