[Denied][Cave Dwarf] [3Rd] Tarvorus Application

[Tarvorus 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: Tarvorus

How old are you?: 17

Time-Zone: London, England

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I've roleplayed on a fair amount of roleplay servers, one being HeroCraft.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was searching for cool RP servers and this one jumped out at me.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1856635-my-lotc-applicaiotn/

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: I have read lots of it, and will try to use it in my biography.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Pretending to be a fictional (usually) character.

Meta-gaming: Doing something like making a decision based on information your character has no way of knowing.

Power-emoting: It's the act of forcing the result of someone's actions on another, E.g. "Tarvorus kills *insert name here* without giving the other player a chance.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Tarvorus Steelstunner

Current Age: 100

Sub-race (if any): Cavern Dwarf

Clan (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Tarvorus Steelstunner was a simple dwarf once, born in the kingdom of Urguan and raised almost the same as all other Dwarvers, but one day his parents left the hold, and never returned. Ever since then, Tarvorus has been a very cold-hearted person, seeking nothing but wealth. In his early years growing up alone, he was a very sneaky one, and somehow knew how to navigate through almost anywhere (due to his heritage as a cave dwarf, but more importantly, he was easily able to recognize where things may be, MAY be, he was sometimes wrong in finding things), he used this skill to find things for people, and in return get paid many Minas. Many often wondered about the mysterious Cave Dwarf who wondered around finding things, but nobody ever found the answer. He soon grew up to be quite an amniable young Dwarf, and got into the blacksmithing buisiness, there he made a small fortune. But, there was always a voice in the back of his head chanting "C'mon, ther's gotta be mer te life than this!".

 

Usually he ignored it, but one day a dwarf around his age named  "MY FRIEND WHO WILL BE JOINING" was wondering around, shouting and screaming for help. "Please, please help, me parens ave gone missin! I be beggin ye all Help!" Tarvorus, usually cold-hearted was in a good mood. he heard his bretherens plea and went over to him. "I see yer plight, as the very same thing 'appened te me! Come, t'gether we can try te find them, if we can't find them then well, I be yer new family." Stunned at his own genorisity Tarvorus sympathised for this Dwarf, as the same thing had happened to him. He thought nobody else would ever understand, but this one knew. He knew the sadness. He realised with sudden shock, that they were both holding the same weight, and thought to himself, "We both have the same weight, why not combine our strengths to hold the two." From then onwards, the two Dwarves vetured around the lands of Anthos, travelling from the Kingdom of Urguan, to the Holy City of Oren, and even into the heart of the Elvish Cities themselves. They had slew many beasts, and completed many labours along the way, but they realised it was no use.

 

They would never find their parents again. The two eventually decided to follow a new path, and rejoice the bitterness that had consumed them, they decided that if they could not help themselves, they would help others. And so. their adventure, begun.

Ambitions for the Future: Tarvorus wishes to gain respect all across the land of Anthos, and be known not as wealthy, or as a tyrant, but as a good souled, brave hearted hero.

Personality: Tarvorus can be quite impatient, and very impulsive, but he also has good judgement, wits and the cunning ability to think of plans others would take ages to think of.

Skills: Mining, Crafting, Cooking

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):http://imgur.com/hcmKSMV 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: He can sometimes adopt the mood of being quite mischief and sneaky, he doesn't have as strong arms as other Dwarves, but he is one of the best smiths.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

 

Answer: "This be crafty lookin, I better be careful." *Tarvorus walks around, inspecting the bridge "Theres got te be anuther way 'round, that bridge there looks like a twig." "I could make me another bridge, but no, that'd take to long, I don't ave any time." *Tarvorus cautiouly walks over to the bridge and puts his foot on it "Aye, looks be decieving, this bridge be sturdy as stone." *Tarvorus starts to uneasily walk across the bridge, his impulsiveness taking over "Steady, steady now, this be quite the challenge! *Tarvorus eventually crosses the bridge and mines the diamonds "I be a rich dwarf now, I be glad of that bridge!"

 

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do? /b]

 

Answer: *Tarvorus ponders on this shady and unnerving scene, he approaches the two shady dwarves "I see you be takin a fancy towards that there youngling, with ye dagger drawn no less, I'd watch it If I be you, you touch him and I'm afraid Ill have to get involved." *Tarvorus gives them a piercing glare and scowls like the worst monster.[

 

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

 

 

Answer: *Tarvorus grins and friendly approaches the bartender "As long as ye don't put nothin in the brew then Ill take 2!" *Tarvorus really wonders if the bartender, one of his own Dwarvern bretheren would put anything in the ale "Are ye sure this is good ale?" *Tarvorus', (against his will for ale) better judgement decides not to accept the brew "Y'know what thanks for te offer but I'd better be goin now friend, sorry!"

[ski_king3 0]

 

While I did like the improvements to the definitions and bio, you still could use a bit of work on your application.

 

For one, when you are posting your application to the Minecraft Forums, do it to this forum topic. Don't make your own topic for it.

 

Also, your skin link seems not to be working. I would try to make sure the link to your skin works next time.

 

Lastly, I would still like you to expand more on your ORQ's, as you added very little from what you had in your previous application. You're very close to being accepted.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

[ski_king3 0]

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