[Denied]Ghostparkour's Application

[ghostparkour 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: ghostparkour.

How old are you?: 16.

Time-Zone: EST.

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes, of course.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: My previous roleplat experiences consist of the following: 1 year of Mount and Blade: Warband Roleplay. I played a aggressive man who was fond of killing. I also have a little experience in medieval plays at a school play that was induced by the teachers for a grade, but it was actually very challenging and I would say increased my roleplaying skills by a ton.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I heard about Lord of the Craft from a good of friend named DrunkenBagel and Onslaughted.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: This is my very first application for LOTC.

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes, I have.

Have you read the Orcish lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes, and with the best of my ability.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Roleplaying is indulging physical and mental feeling into a character like it's actually you. When you're roleplaying your character takes full control of you and will use that to express with others. It may sound weird at first but when you read it through slowly and thoughtfully it actually makes tons of sense.

Meta-gaming: Metagaming is very simple and easy to avoid. Simple as using OOC information for a advantage in IC. Let me give you a quick and easy example: You're on Teamspeak and you overhear some Humans talking about the upcoming war with the Orcs and take that information and express it with the Orcs.

Power-emoting: Powergaming on the other hand is a little more complex. Powergaming is forcing a action on another player very unresponsively without giving the opposing player any room to fight back or indulge in attacks.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Urog

Current Age: 21

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): 

 

Urog was born in the deserted area of Anthos where he was accompanied by his young brother and his aristocratic mother. Growing up, Urog had a hard time trying to fit in with everyone, it wasn't the fact that he wasn't funny or had the best looks but for the witted fact he wasn't as strong as all the other opposing Orcs. Urog's mother knew how Urog felt inside and decided to take departure. It was a warm, calm day in the deserted parts of Anthos, the warm breeze brushing across your face, the soft bristled bushes rolling in the calm wind. Urog was slumped over, sitting, on the front deck of the Gorkil fort, enjoying the peace whilst he could, when his mother approached him from behind, sat down and began to spoke. Mother: "Latz knuw' lat cun pructiz dat strungnes rut ere 'en er blarg, yub?". Urog : "Yub, muffa mi knuw'. Mother: " Den whu latz nut pructiz?" Urog: " Muffa, mi dun knuw' pluz luve mi alun!". Urog's mother tried her best to boost up Urog's self esteem, but only resulted in failure and crushing it even more.

 

Not long after Urog recovered from his depression he joined the Gorkil Tribe shortly after he proved his rightfulness to them. The Gorkil's taught Urog the way of a Orc in all ways they could've. Urog slowly progressed into the Orc he should really be, very slowly. He eventually became joining them in battles, when he finally learned the ability to equip a axe and a decent size bow. Urog's tendency to kill was growing by the month, slowly. Things would stop, and pick back up a while later, the training became easier and easier. After a while Urog sat down by his mom and greekly smiled, "Mi knuw' whu mi reely' um knuw' muffa."

 

Ambitions for the Future: Urog's ambitions are to serve the Gorkil Tribe in all ways possible, to make his mother proud.

Personality: Urog is a self centered Orc but can be a devil when needs be.

Skills: Urog has decent skill in axemanship and bowmanship, Urog is not the best, maybe not even great but can surely make a shot if it needs be.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Well toned, light green, 9,2, decently muscled, damped.( http://i.imgur.com/jnrjbIC.png )

Any other details you wish to share about your character: Nothing special.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. You are roaming the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks, as you near the Arena you spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human garbs as he looks at you he smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let me teach you of civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!”, how do you react?

 

Answer: Urog at first is confused but slowly realizes the true meaning behind the man's sentence. Urog approaches the Orc with a passionate face but turns into a horrifying face in a matter of seconds and says to the Orc  "Wut latz bi duin! Wuh latz butreyin! Mi be rumovin latz hud ob latz butrey!" The Orc is slightly frightened and stares in a panic. "Wull? Unyfing latz huv tu blah!?" The Orc catches his tongue and says the words, "Nuub!" as he scurrys off.

 

2. As you are watching an Arena fight between two Orcs, the Goj of Krug walks towards the Arena, and shouts “Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!” How do you react to this?

 

Answer: As loyal as Urog does, he listens to the Goj of Krug and does what he says with no hesitation at all. But a few other Orc's stare at the Goj of Krug and speak to each other about him in a awful manner and refuses and attempts to persuade Urog but Urog declines and continues to walk. 

 

3. As you are travelling in the barren Orcish deserts you come across a quiet oasis. Beside it sits a small tent where a young orc is preparing a meal of roasted halfling. He calls you over, offering you to join in with his meal. What does your character do?

 

Answer: Urog smiles greekly and happily walks over to the Orc, he takes a sit and says "Latz huv eny fo mi?" the orc responds "Yub! Tuk sum!" Urog grabs some meat from the pot not knowing what it is and begins to eat it, enjoying it. He glares into the night sky and smiles greekly.

[IrishPerson 693]

~Under Review~

 

 

 

 

Sadly I have had to deny your application, the reasons are as follows:

 

• Your bio lacks some server lore, you should add in place names and thins of that sort.
• You need to expand and add some more detail to your ORQ's.

Once these two small things are done I believe you will be able to get accepted in no time!

 

Please wait at least a full twenty four hours as of this post's edit (seen below) before posting your next attempt. If you have any questions, feel free to send me a message. Good luck with your next application.

Edited June 30, 2013 by MrGreene

[IrishPerson 693]

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