[Denied][Human] Gamemonster55 - Application

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: gamemonster55
How old are you?: 13
Time-Zone: MST
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have been to many different and unique roleplay servers, but each one has a different view on how to roleplay, so don't expect me to be experienced at the LOTC style of roleplaying. 
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for some roleplay servers, and I just happened to find lord of the craft.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: This is my first application here.
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): After I am finished with this application I will copy and paste it to the Minecraft forum.
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes, I have read the lore for the most part. I will make sure that my biography fits with it.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Basically you, make up a character and you play that role, along with other people who play other roles.
Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is common, and easy to accidentally do. When you meta-game, your taking stuff you learned OOC, and telling your character (who does not know you) what you learned, and using it in your characters advantage. Meta-gaming is considered a form of Over-Powering your character.
Power-emoting: I am not sure about this one, but I believe it is the same thing as Over-Powered. When you're Over-Powered, you're making your character nearly invincible, or at least making him avoid getting injured when he is supposed to be injured. I do apologies if Power-emoting is not the same thing as Over-Powered. 

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Albus Baldor (If this does not fit with Human lore please say so. I could not find any naming material anywhere)
Current Age: 20
Sub-race (if any): No sub-race.
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

Albus was born into a poor family that could barely pay for any meals. While living in a small cottage near the eastern side of West Port, Albus was very interested in hunting. His father was a woodsman, and wanted to pass that down to Albus by forcing him to chop saplings with toy axes. Albus didn't like chopping saplings, and refused to do it some times. Well that made his father angry.

 

Albus's father gave him a real good beating whenever Albus refused to chop saplings. At most times Albus ran into the woods and hid from his father. He never actually ran away until he was 16. When he was 16 he ran into the forests, and taught himself how to hunt.

 

Albus was never exactly considered a good hunter, but he was good enough to feed himself. One of the best day's of Albus's life was when he got a horse, which he named "Defender" He named his horse defender because his horse defended him whenever he was attacked.

 

Now Albus goes around from town to town trading meat for weapons, food, and money.

Ambitions for the Future:[/b] Albus hopes to find a place to live.
Personality:[/b] Albus is the kind of brave hero type of guy. He does have some problems with patience and some times might shout at people for taking so long on something. Albus 
Skills:[/b] Albus is a good archer, and can ride a horse. He is good enough with daggers, but he will never use his dagger as his primary weapon.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b] Sorry I am having a lot of trouble with uploading the screenshots. If you want to you can check my skin when I get on.
Any other details you wish to share about your character:[/b] Nothing really.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: I shout as loud as I can "Guards, guards! This man looks like an outlaw!"

 

The guards close the gate, and the man turns around, while drawing out two daggers. I pull out my bow and get an arrow ready, as he charges at me.

 

Just as he realizes my bow it is too late. The arrow goes straight into his chest and he falls over with blood pouring out of his chest. I walk up to him and take his mask off to find that I just killed my brother.

 

"What have I done?!" I shout up to the sky.

[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer: I continue to ride my horse through the forest, hoping that the bandits don't notice me. I am not good with swords anyways. I am much better with a bow. If only I had one-

 

One of the bandits notices me and throws a dagger right in my direction. I am so lucky that the dagger goes right beside my head cutting off a small amount of hair, and a small chunk of my ear off.

 

I turn around to find that one of the bandits is looking at me. I draw my sword and get ready for a bloody battle. The bandit throws another dagger. This time I jump of my horse allowing the dagger to go straight into my foot. I land on the ground rolling to the side in pain as the dagger comes out of my foot. I stand up and feel the blood pouring from my foot.

 

The next thing I know I hear "Oof" from the other bandit, and then I see the iron blade come out of the bandit trying to kill me's stomach.

 

 

[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]

Answer: "Everything...." I smirk and keep going. "Why you wouldn't happen to have a new bow? My old one was... devoured."

 

"I have all kinds of bows. Short bows, long bows, cross bows. You name it, I have it!"

 

My jaw drops as I look at the glorious treasures before my eyes.

 

"Whats that?" I point at a shiny blue gem.

 

"That's a diamond! You can have it for only 100000 Minas!"

 

"No way! I'll take that long bow."

 

I pull out 50 Minas.

 

"Its all I have."

 

"No way. No money. No buying"

 

"Whatever" I turn and walk off.

 

 

I hope I get accepted! :)

 

EDIT: Okay I see I didn't get the title perfect, but that shouldn't matter. Going to copy and paste this to the Minecraft forums now. I almost forgot to.

[ski_king3 0]

 

Your power-emoting definition was incorrect, sadly. Go to this wiki page and read what it is exactly, it should help you understand power-emoting a bit better.

 

Your biography is pretty short. I'd like to see it expanded a bit, and have some more server lore added to it.

 

You must upload a screenshot of your skin. If you are having trouble with this, take a screenshot in a single-player world, go to imgur.com and upload the screenshot there. Then, post the link in your next application, and you should be good to go.

 

Alright, your first ORQ was a bit short, and could use some lengthening. Also, it seems a bit odd that he was your brother. Why?

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

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