[Denied][Elf]B3Ast_Mod (Alt Account)

[CombatRolePlay 1863]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Main Account Name:B3ast_mod
Alternate Account Name:Gederp
How old are you?:15
Time-Zone: GMT +8
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:LORTC and other dead servers

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: When a player acts as if he or she is the character and only know what the character knows.
Meta-gaming: When a plyer uses information that is supposedly only for the player not for the character, and also abusing MC mechanics.
Power-emoting:When an RPing character power emotes, he or she does impossilbe feats such as carriying a bucket of lava, or just simply stepping back to dodge an attack, or even "Insticntivley" senses a person following him/her.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Aegro Aegnis
Current Age: 257
Race: Elf
Sub-race (if any):
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

Aegro was born in salvus with pure blood elven parents. At the age of 10 Aegros parent suddenly dissapeard leaving the house unpayed for, and leaving a large debt for him to pay.Being 10 years old, aegro did not know what to do, until one day a group of heavily armored men crashed through the door of his house, looking for a payment, Without any money, Aegro was sold as a slave , switching from master to master. When he was 80 a young age in elven years, he got away from his captors and ran away as far as he can, to VaerHaven, a land far from Oren. There, he Issolated himself from society, only visiting the city for food and to do odd jobs. He did this for 50 years, until one day, a group of adventrers found his cave, and thought of him as a beast, becasue of his large body and red eyes, he soon transfered back to Oren land, where his owners were long dead, For him he was finally free, free from slavery. Al he wants now is to see his parents, and ask them why he did it.
Ambitions for the Future:He wants to see his parents, to know the reason they left him.
Personality: Often disrespectfull he usually travels the land of anthos alone, collecting precious things and then selling them, he is sometimes greedy.
Skills: He has no particular skills except for cooking since he was a slave (haha)
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

(I'll edit this as soon as possible, sorry ^_^)
Any other details you wish to share about your character: He is 7'6 and very muscuallar but friendly when nto threatened.

[o_Ben_o 193]

Denied!

 

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Your definitions were a bit bland and need expansion on it's answers. Make sure they are all correct and add examples to your answers.

 

Add more length to your biography. Go into more depth when talking about your characters life and add more detail to certain parts so we can read a clear and interesting biography of your character.  Also make sure all your grammar is correct and that you are using a sufficient amount of server lore, when writing your next one.

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Overall your formatting was also quite poor, please set out your next application in a more neat and more presentable manner - this will improve the Reviewers view on it.

[o_Ben_o 193]

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