MonkeyCoffee 516 Share Posted July 15, 2013 Your application has been... Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the reasons listed below. Don't be discouraged however, as I'm sure you'll be able to fix it! First off, I wish that you change your meta-gaming definition, since it is wrong, and expand your power-emoting definition. Add examples to both too! Just remember to not plagiarise! Secondly, Asulon is not a city, but a continent. Then, your character could beat anyone, even if they were of an older age? That sound very much like powergaming. Please change this! There is no demon named 'Abbadon', nor will a demon ever talk to a ranom person and promise them something. In your whole biography, you did not include lore. Here is a link to the wiki to help you! 5'11" tall is very short for an Elf. Their average height is about 6'4". Also, your skin represents a Wood Elf. Dark Elves have a dark skin, usually grey or black! Your first and second Open Response Question need dialogue and actions. Write how you'd emote in-game! This may seem like quite a lot, but I assure you, you will be able to fix it! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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