[Denied][Human] Firetype01

[Firetype_The_Great 0]

[Lita 677]

Your definitions need work. All of them should be expanded upon but primarily Metagaming and Powergaming, as they are not completely correct. Examples help, as you did in the third.

 

Grammar and spelling could use a little bit of work.

 

A bit more server lore wouldn't hurt, such as the fact that minas are the only currency in LoTC. You could include events, places, and other sorts, just to make sure you have a well-fleshed out character.

 

Remember to wait 24 hours after this is edited before reapplying, and please PM me if you have any questions.

Edited July 30, 2013 by Escharian
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