[Denied]Jonah 5Th App

[Jonah Hus Dion 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - jovasix

How old are you?: - 13

What time-zone do you live in?: - ET Us

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Yes i roleplayed On Many Minecraft servers And World of Warcraft

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes Roleplaycraft

Have you applied to this server before?-(Please link past applications): - http://www.lordofthe...-1st-was-denied

planet minecraft- http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/lord-of-the-craft-jonah-5th-app/

How did you hear about us?: - Mostly Youtube But my friends talked about it at my house sometimes

What do you think the server will be like? - Very Good Sense I love Roleplay

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes I Read Them And I accept them

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - Prob Metagaming And Powergaming of been on rp servers and the admins dont even care if they do do it.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not Google’s.

What is roleplaying?: - i think it is when you have to act as character and stay in character and express every detail and emote every action.

What’s metagaming?: - Using Knowdlege that the character has otained in game.

example: When you know their name but they never told you it

What’s powergaming?: - Not giving a chance for the other player to react to your emote. example: Kills Jonah

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Jonah HusDion

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 22

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - Jonah Was born in a small cottage just outside of The Holy Oren Empire Land. Jonah Dad Worked as a Hunter and brought home and selled it. And Jonahs Mom was A farmer She would make Meals For Jonah And his dad. Jonah loved life very much

he never wanted it to end.

jonah wasnt so populaur though he would get made fun off at school. At School but his parents would always cheer him up. His Dad Told Jonah That he would be Joining The Emareld Rangers to Defend Oren From The Bad Guys. Jonah was very sad that he had to go and he cried but he did move on.

At the Age of 17 Jonah helped out his mom. He Hunted For FOod So they could keep their small cottage. But When Jonah Herd From The Emareld Rangers he was told That his father had Been Serisoly Injured and had to come home . Jonah Mom had to take care off his father. SO Jonah had to cook,hunt and clean the house every day. Jonah Had to Run The Cottage Almost by himself. Jonah Was finally the age of 21. Jonah Then Heard News That Oren Was Going to war he wanted to help defend Oren like his father. He started his travel to the Cloud Temple To talk to Monks.

On the way there though he was atacked by Bandits he did defeat most of them but One of them Boncked Him on The head really hard with a rock and he lost his memory of everything besides his Name. Strangers From Nearby Inn Close and took

him back to a medical doctor he thanked them and payed them minas. Then Jonah spoke to the mons about his Destiny And now the Adventure Begins. Jonah Must Find Out His Past Memory Then Train to Become a Emareld Ranger.

Now In The Present Jonah Weighs 160 punds And He Is 5,8 And he is Really Buffy of all the hard work he has been doing by himself. but he does ask monks for advice a lot cause they treat him very nicley.

What are they like (personality)?: - Jonah Is Very Serious about the stuff he does thats why he started to lose friends when his parents died but sometimes just sometimes Jonah does laugh and smile. Jonah Does not like to hurt people.

What are their ambitions?: - To Become A Soilder Most likley A Emareld Ranger and maybe find love

Do they have any special skills?: - Yes Jonah Is good at cooking and hunting for animals because of his mother and fathers teachings. And he likes to stick to his iron sword mostly but sometimes he does use his bow.

What are their weaknesses?: - Dont Know if this is Weakness but seing Blood makes him throwup sometimes he through upalot when he and his father hunted.

What do they look like?: - He Has Brown Hair with Brown Eyes Fairly long hair and he wears leather underneath his armor for extra protection.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - Nope Thats All i got

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - my skin thing didnt work but if ya look on the Links i gave ya it is there either planet minecraft or one of my denial ones i try to see if i can fix it

Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

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[Nug 2011]

Sadly, I must deny this application, many edits/changes are required before acceptance such as:

 

~ Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are still partially incorrect, you can Google answers but make sure you write them in your own words.

 

~ Your bio/past history still has the cliche of your character's parents dying, please avoid this and tell more about your character's childhood.

 

~ Flesh out his weaknesses, seeing blood and puking because of it isn't really a weakness, examples of weaknesses are things like not being too intelligent or your character being quite weak.

 

~ Include a screenshot of your character's skin.

 

~ You did not post on the Minecraft Forums, when reapplying, please post on both our forums and the Minecraft Forums, our thread can be found here.

 

~ Work on your grammar, spelling, and punctuation, etc. There are many language errors throughout this application that should be fixed.

 

You may reapply on the 26th of September, this will give you time to perfect your application.

[Nug 2011]

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