[Denied][Elf] Elioriand's Application

[rorydq 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - rorydq

How old are you?: - 13

What time-zone do you live in?: - central

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes. I have played a Hack/Mine rp server and on garry's mod dark rp if that counts.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - No

How did you hear about us?: -My Friend Eladriendil

What do you think the server will be like? - Very Serious Role playing

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - Not to play as another players charecter

Definitions

This
is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know
about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that
you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Pretending that you are your charecter in the game and that your in the game

What’s metagaming?: - Talking to people through other terms such as skype

What’s powergaming?: - Doing something that makes it so another player can not react.
In-Character Information

Now
you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable!
Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with
a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Elioriand

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Elf

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 18

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - As a child at the age of 10 his parents died it was so terrible he supressed it in hi his head so he now doesn't know part of his past and he is trying to find out what happened he then went to find a elven royalty as a friend who he knew for a year who later was killed by an assassin so now not only is he trying to find that assassin he is also recovering his past.
What are they like (personality)?: - Angry, Irrational, and Quick witted.

What are their ambitions?: - Art, combat, And intense training.

Do they have any special skills?: - He is good with a sword.

What are their weaknesses?: - He does not make any plans.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Brown hair, Green eyes, Nimble, Green Clothing.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - He is a very smart young Elf but doesn't think when in battle.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -


 

[Nug 2011]

Sadly, I must deny this application for the following reasons:

 

~ Expand upon and correct all definitions, you can use Google for answers but write your answers in your own words.

 

~ Current past history/story is very cliche and short, lengthen it by including lore, info on your character's family, childhood, etc. 

 

~ Flesh out weaknesses, special skills, and ambitions as they are very basic and feel underdeveloped. 

 

You may reapply 24 hours from this post, best of luck with your next application.

[Nug 2011]

Moved to Denied Forum