[Denied]2Nd Whitelist Application- Adgclark14

[Adgclark14 0]

Whitelist Application: Lord of the Craft

 

            Out-of-Character Information:

 

Minecraft Username: Adgclark14

 

Age: 14

 

Time-Zone: Mountain Time

 

Have you ever Role-played before: Yes I have,
through all kinds of different computer MMOs. And I also have played other
Minecraft MMOs, like Desiredcraft and Lichcraft

 

Have I applied before: Only once, with the same
character

 

How did I hear about Lord of the Craft: My
friend, Jordan AKA. Raxxtus

 

What do you think the server will be like: From
the things I have heard from Raxxtus, they seem pretty amazing

 

Read and Agreed to the Rules: Yes I have read
and will abide by the rules

 

Favorite Rule: I think my favorite rule is no
villainous actions

 

Definitions:

 

Role-playing: Role-playing is when you are in
control of a persons actions that you choose or customize, and make decisions
according to what you want your character to become

 

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is when you change the
way you play a game based on things that happen in the game, or change the way
you play because of a premeditated ruleset

 

Power-gaming: Power-gaming is when you play a
game based on the ruleset to get the maximum amount of results to make your
character as powerful as possible, i.e. Character Interaction

 

            In-Character Information:

 

Character Name: Quentin Lazara Forest

 

What Race/Sub-race: Elf, Wood Elf

 

Sex: Male

 

Age: 45

 

Brief Description of their life: Quentin Lazara
Forest, was born a very unusual child, born in the Holy Princedom of Malinor in
the year 1457, a city hidden from most. The moment he opened his eyes he had a
fighting spirit. His family consisted of his mother, father, and an older
brother. His family was small but not uncommon among the elves. Quentin always
looked up to his older brother because he was always the best archer and scholar.
His brother was a scout in the army, and a very skilled one at that. His
brother’s name was Lance White Forest. Lance had always been a skilled person,
and he also taught Quentin the ways of Diplomacy and War Strategies. His mother
had always been caring of him especially after birth. His mother and him had
always shared a special bond, she taught him things his people could never have
told him. His father was always a secretive man, even though after work he
always seemed to be on an edgy mood, which Quentin thought was weird but never
said anything. Quentin was always the smartest one in his learning, but he had
flaws, he wasn’t the classiest and the greatest speaker, so he didn’t have many
friends, but he always had no problem with that. At age 25, Quentin had decided
to leave his home and go out into the world of Anthos to find a job and get
himself into the inner workings of Anthos. But before he left, his father had
pulled him into his room and started talking,” Quentin Lazara Forest, I know
that you are about to leave and go out into the world. But before you leave I
think you have the right to know about my secrets.” Quentin was shocked, he… he
didn’t know what to say. “My first is, I am a mercenary, even your mother
doesn’t know this but if you decide to tell her, please let her down gently.
Also, your brother is indeed a soldier but as a side-job he works with me as an
apprentice and has exceeding good skill at this. Now this is my proposal, I
think Lance should go out on his own. And I have asked him to take you as an
apprentice, if you say no, I understand. If you say yes, I also understand.”
Quentin bubbled with extreme rage, he whispered to himself,” My whole life is a
lie.” Quentin then stormed out of his room and stormed out the door, without a
goodbye to his mother, sisters, father, or brother. The brother he thought was
the most honest, most trustworthy person in the world, but he was a dirty
filthy liar, a mercenary, of all the jobs he is a mercenary. Quentin or the
next 14 years, never talked to his family again and he worked on his battle
skills and trained himself to be on edge but never decided to kill anyone with
justice and honor.

 

Personality: Not extremely classy or friendly,
but is extremely smart and uses a lot of unused words in the elven language. He
also is courageous and is conscious about his decisions, so he doesn’t take a
lot of risks.

 

Ambitions: To become a general in the army, die
an honorable death, and to defend any innocent at any costs, and to come clean
about his family’s past to his friends.

 

Special Skills: Very Diplomatic, Extremely Smart

 

Weaknesses: Not a talkative person, cant talk to
others very well, doesn’t take too many risks.

 

Looks: Short Brown hair with accents of green,
Blues eyes, Medium build, 5’6”

 

Extra Information: None

[aron. 427]

Unfortunately, your application has been denied. I really enjoyed your bio, but a few other things were lacking. 

 

- Your definitions are still incorrect. If you want help, make sure to PM me, as certain definitions have double meanings! Compare yours to other accepted applications, if need be (Just make sure not to plagiarize!)

 

- Your skin is still a little far fetched.. If you'd like, make a post in our graphics forum; there are plenty of people willing to help make skins. If all else fails, I could find some time to make a skin for you.

 

Good job adding more lore into your bio; it looks good. You may reapply in 24 hours. Good luck!

[aron. 427]

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