[Denied]Comet123's Application

[Comet123 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -npp
How old are you?: -13
What time-zone do you live in?: -GMT

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -no
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -no
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): -http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84716-elf-anthros/#entry734228

How did you hear about us?: -A friend
What do you think the server will be like? -I think it will be fun because my friend is obsessed with it. 
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -You need to keep in-character at all times.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -When you have to act out an in game character in a particular role.

What’s metagaming?: -Using out-of-game information to aid yout character in game.

What’s powergaming?: -Preforming an action to another player before they can act.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -Tathros Ironbeard

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -Cave Dwarf

What sex are they?: -male

How old are they?: -180

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: -When i was a child I left to go find riches for my family. I was not successful and when I returned to my home I found that my family had left.

What are they like (personality)?: -I am strict and greedy.

What are their ambitions?: -My ambitions are to obtain great riches with my brother.

Do they have any special skills?: -I'm good at agriculture and fighting.

What are their weaknesses?: -My weakness is aiding my brother in a dire situation

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: Red hair, muscular, blue eyes.

Anything else you want to say about them?: They will be a clan elder in the Ironbeard clan because the Ironbeard clan father is Tathros' brother.

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  

[Tsuyose 3285]

I'm going to have to deny this application due to the application being rather short. I'd like for you to very much so expand upon most of it, especially the biography. It's very cliche and you need to add in detail. I'd also like for you to expand upon the meta-gaming, power-gaming and role-playing definitions.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions then send me a PM. Good luck on your next application!

[Tsuyose 3285]

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