[Denied]Westman599

[Westman599 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -westman5999

How old are you?: - 14

What time-zone do you live in?: - Pacific

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Yes i have on many other games.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - No

How did you hear about us?: - My friend told me about this server and it sounded awesome.

What do you think the server will be like? - Very fun and action packed.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - The rule that i like the most is that you can have some mods installed like rei's minimap or more player models.

Definitions

This
is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know
about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that
you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Taking the role of a character that has been self made or given.

What’s metagaming?: - Taking out of character knowledge and applying it in game.

What’s powergaming?: - Making other players annoyed or using the system to your advantage.

In-Character Information

Now
you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable!
Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with
a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Olaf StormFire

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Mountain Dwarf

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 36 Seasons

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - Both of his parents were murderd by bandits while they were going to trade the furs that they had gotten off of some bears that they had hunted. A few seasons later when old enough to leave his village he left on his greatest quest, to find the bandits that mudered his parents and put an end to it all. He finaly found out that the bandits had purchaced a tavern where they were hiding and he went to their tavern to end it. When he entered their tavern he saw the man that killed them, Olaf swiftley drew his sword and charged for the man. Olaf had finnaly gotten closure from ending the bandit's discraceful life but in return for that he went to prison, he was charged for murder and they were going to execute him via guillotine but a human woman who thought that what he did was very heroic stopped the guards and took him to her house. They then fell in love but she later died from a disease. Olaf now is but a humble smith for his village.

What are they like (personality)?: - Very stern and a self made man.

What are their ambitions?: - To find any bandits and put them to justice.

Do they have any special skills?: - He is very strong and smart.

What are their weaknesses?: - Any loved one dying.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He is a strong dwarf and is rather tall for his race he has dark black hair.

Anything else you want to say about them?: -



Fantastic,
there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our
forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[aron. 427]

 

- Your powergaming definition was incorrect, and your other two definitions could use improvement. Use more detail, if you could.

 

- Your bio seemed a little bit cliche, and as well contained villainous activities. I suppose it could be considered "provoked" for arguments sake, but that's sort of irrelevant. The concept of a woman saving him from peril and falling in love is a good idea, and I think you should find a way to use that without the whole "bandit parents" thing. Just my two cents ;3

 

- You don't have a link to the sin you plan on using. Please add that in your next application

 

You may reapply in 24 hours. Good luck~

[aron. 427]

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