[Denied]Grumpy Leprechaun Application 1

[GrumpyLeprechaun 0]

Out-Of-Character
Information

What’s
your Minecraft Account Name?: hae231.

How old
are you?: 12.

What
time-zone do you live in?: GMT + 8:00

 

Have you
ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: No.

Have you
been on any other roleplaying servers?: No.

Have you
applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): No.

 

How did
you hear about us?: From my friend Thrain_Ironmail.

 

What do
you think the server will be like?: I think it will be a great experience
that will allow me to be someone that I’m not and go completely against some of
my morals.

 

Have you
read and agreed to the rules?: yes.

 

What’s
your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: My favourite
rule is that that you have to stay in character all the time because it adds to
the part that you’re meant to be someone that your not and you stay that way.

 

Definitions

 

What is
roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you play someone that you are not and do
everyday tasks as that character in a fictional world.

 

What’s
metagaming?:  The strategy to reach a high in-game level.

 

What’s
powergaming?: Interacting with the game to reach a specific in-game goal.

 

In-Character
Information

 

What’s
your character called?: Izarka.

 

What race
are they (and sub-race)?: Izarka is Human with a sub-race of daemon.

 

What sex
are they?: Male.

 

How old
are they?: 16

 

Give us a
brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: 

 

Let's start with why he is part daemon. When he 6 his father brought home a fruit
from the underworld. They didn't know what it was called but their father said
it was the last fruit of that kind anywhere. The boys, being young
and mischievous, decided to eat the fruit. This fruit turned them part
daemon and gave them extraordinary powers but could only be used at times when
they were in a great deal of trouble. Now let's talk about his childhood.
Izarka was bulled as a child for being thin, weak and having no muscles. They
kids would call him stick insect, twig and they would say, 'Where are your
leaves, tree branch." It only got worse after his parents died, 'Why don't
you go cry to mummy. Oh wait, you can't.' They would say. This all changed when
he was 14 and discovered he could use his powers. He didn't use it when he was
in grave danger he'd use them for fun which is how he got his mischievous
personality. Now let's go to family. He had a mother named Angela, a twin
brother named Ikira and a father named Shakil. His mother was the only one with
a normal name. His mother died when she gave birth to the twins, so Izarka had
no memory of her. His father died when he was killed by an orc, this started
Izarka's hate for orcs which I will go into later. Last of all his brother died
at the young age of 7 when the daemons came after the boys for eating the
fruit. Apparently this fruit was sacred among the daemons at the time but now
is no longer. Having all his family and relatives dead Izarka is the last of
his family.

 

What are they like (personality)?: Izarka is a generally troublesome and

mischievous boy. He doesn't let anyone stand in his way unless he is under high
threat. He likes humans, dwarves and elves but hates the other races except
daemons. With daemons he has a love hate relationship. He will happily work
with humans, dwarves and elves but will work with other races but not happily.
He is easily angered and it is easy to make him hate you and he will kill if he
wants to. He also plays a lot of practical jokes that sometimes get people
hurt.

What are

their ambitions?: Izarka only has one and one only ambition, to be known
across all the LOTC world. Every thing he does is to reach that goal even if it
seems he is doing it for a different reasons.

 

Do they
have any special skills?: 

He is
able to cause fear to his foes and cause nausea and blindness. He also very
persuasive and deceitful. He is also a fairly good bowman and is fairly
stealthy.

 

What are
their weaknesses?: His biggest weakness is that if something bad happens
that's his fault and he didn't mean it only then will he feel guilt. If he
feels guilty he will not be able to use his powers to his fullest. He is also
weak if he is sexually attracted to something. It makes him do stupid stuff to
look strong and tough. Another weakness of his is that if someone is better
than him he will do all he can to be better than them.

 

Give us a
description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: He is about 160cm
tall and it fairly thin. He has creamy skin with red hair. Because he is part
daemon he has read marks all over him. He has a red aura on his chest and has
red eyes. He has some muscles but not many and is very grubby as he is not the
one to have a permanent house. One of his eyes is usually half covered or
completely covered by a waft of hair going over it.

 

Anything
else you want to say about them?: 

Izarka
will hurt or even KILL anyone who makes fun of his parents or his family as he
is the only one left. Also he does not like having a permanent house and
prefers the streets, make-shift camps or living in taverns or with a friend. He
does not rely on strength but relies on his skills with a bow or stealth though
will still use swords if he has to. He will also work for any pay as long as
the money keeps him alive, pays for his food and is able to pay for some
weapons if he saves.

 

Please give us a screenshot of
your character’s skin: 

 

 

[ski_king3 0]

 

Unfortunately, I must deny you for this application. It's certainly not a bad start, but there are quite a few notable changes which need to be made before you can be accepted.

 

To start, your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect. Feel free to google the definitions for these if you are unfamiliar with them, but if you are having trouble finding them or otherwise understanding them, this page will do an excellent job helping you. It's a wiki article which has the three definitions we ask for included.

 

Now, Daemons are an ancient race, one which you cannot apply as. You may only apply as one of the descendant races, human, orc, elf or dwarf, and any of their respective sub-races. Daemon is not a sub-race.

 

You also really ought to be applying as a character who is 18 years or older.

 

Simply put, there is no "underworld" which exists within our lore, and you cannot have a fruit which gives you the powers of a Daemon. Having your family all die/be killed by orcs is rather cliche, and I would advise using it in your biography. Also, Daemons would not go and hunt down mortals, that's simply not in their nature.

 

Please remove all portions from the rest of your application which relate to your character being a Daemon, as he cannot be one. I would also avoid mentioning sexual attraction, although this isn't necessarily a reason for denial, so long as you do not detail any sort of interaction.

 

You must post the skin you intend to use in the application.

 

You must also post your application on the Minecraft Forum Post. 

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

[ski_king3 0]

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