[Denied]My Character (Edward Elric) Application

[EdwardElric 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - BloodElf09

How old are you?: - 19

What time-zone do you live in?: - pacific time (USA)

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes as a medieval elf in massivecraft.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - yes

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - no

How did you hear about us?: - minecraft server website.

What do you think the server will be like? - amazing and less dumb little kids

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - I agree with the fighting rule of you should tell them when you are going to attack.

Definitions


What is roleplaying?: - It is acting as if you were in another time or place in a role of what type of person you want to be.

What’s metagaming?: - When you use outside knowledge to gain advantage in a game, and act out of character.

What’s powergaming?: - sort of like a any means neccesary player willing to do anythig to win.

In-Character Information


What’s your character called?: - Edward Elric

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - human

What sex are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 19

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - My name is Edward Elric son to Mia and Odenhime Elric. I had one brother, Al who met his untimely death at the age of 4 by disease. My mother was so sad she too also died shortly after from her sorrow. My father from my mothers death had left me for I reminded him of our mother. I was only 10 when he left. We had lived in New Ager, where I still lived for some time tell i left at the age of 19 to become somebody at the capitol. But, from my age of 10 to 19......It was the worst time of my life. I barely scraped by to even buy a loaf of bread a weak. For ages it seemed I did this until one day I collapsed.

 

I awoke to find a young woman about my age of 16 looking down at me. I sprung right up frightened that I was being kidnapped  Until I saw that I was in a house of an elderly woman sitting across the room. Her granddaughter was the young women named Winry. She told me I had been in a coma for 3 months. I looked over at my right arm to see a mechanized arm!!!! It hurt when I moved it and I screamed to Winry what have you done to my arm!!!! She said calmly my grandma is very wise with machinery and we found out your arm was decaying from disease. We had to act fast so my grandma added a mechanic arm to attach to your nerves... I said how did you do this and she said it was a gift from god my knowledge of machines. I was grateful to them for I would of died from the disease.

 

I stayed there for awhile and me and Winry got along pretty well I might think I like her. But I needed to go to get accustomed to my new arm and go through the intense training to become strong enough to have this arm. the grandma had said she new of a man who was into weird arts of the body and mind and told me where to find him. lone behold he was in New Ager as a farmer he didn't look like much but when I showed him my arm and asked him to teach me he did not refuse. Those next couple of years were like hell on earth but I learned this new self defense named Martial Arts from a far off land...I didn't understand how these body movements worked but it somehow made me stronger and able to fight with no sword but with just my hands. I thanked this man and gave him my gratitude and went off on a journey to the capitol to look for work so I could live again and maybe even find my father.

What are they like (personality)?: - He is calm, very balanced In his life and not hot headed. He also is very hard working and from his messed up childhood knows discipline and how grateful for food.

What are their ambitions?: - He wants to become a better person than his father and have a better life than he has had so far by working his way up in the capitol.

Do they have any special skills?: - He learned martial Arts for years and has a mechanical right arm almost indestructible but needs maintenance from Winry the granddaughter.

What are their weaknesses?: - His past he does not like to dwell on it and he and his brother was close if anyone knew about his past and tried to blackmail him with his past he would fall.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - his height is 5'10" He weighs about 165, Muscular built has a mechanic right arm Usually wears a red overcoat and white gloves, golden yellow hair(usually in a french braid), Golden yellow eyes

Anything else you want to say about them?: - He is determined to do anything when he sets his mind on it.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

[Friendly Guy 223]

1. Please give examples of Metagaming and powergaming

2. Sadly we can not have bionic arms as its not accepted lore nor has our technology reached such a point ((We are more at the stage of learning siege weapons and basic physics))

3. Add more weakness's ((IE Can he be tricked easily ect.))

 

Well done on the skin and fixing these things will surely bring you onto the server.

[Friendly Guy 223]

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