[Denied]My Application

[Primrose 59]

What’s
your Minecraft Account Name?: -  NatetheGreat237

How
old are you?: -  17

What
time-zone do you live in?: -  EST (New York)

Have
you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -  DND

Have
you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  no

Have
you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): -
 no

How
did you hear about us?: - through a friend

What
do you think the server will be like? -  a very interesting
place to enjoy lots of role play goodness

Have
you read and agreed to the rules?: -  yes

What’s
your favorite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  you
have to roleplay before you can just start killing players

Definitions

This
is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know
about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure
that you write the reply in your own words, not another website /
person's!

What
is roleplaying?: -
 roleplaying is when you talk and act like someone you are not,
acting how they would act to something not how you would act to
something, when i see blood i yell but say if i were roleplaying
a barbarian
he would not be afraid of blood so i would not yell when i
see it when i am roleplaying him.

What’s
metagaming?: -
 when you talk to another person that is involved in
the conversation outside of the chat, i Skype my teammate
that can't hear me in game and tell him what i am going to do.

What’s
powergaming?: -  emoting something and not letting other
people react eg: i run at you, stab you in the neck now your dead. 

In-Character
Information

Now
you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable!
Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up
with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s
your character called?: -  Zoey

 

What
race are they (and sub-race)?: -  wood elf

What
sex are they?: -  female

How
old are they?: -  237

Give
us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family
(Include server lore when writing): -
 Grew up in a small village on the edge of the forest of Malinor,
was raised by her  mother  and her father , even
from a early her parents taught her how to gather information from
every form of life, from the trees to the elf's of her village,
even though her parents wanted her to become a huntress and come join
the family manner but from an early age her dream was to become a
writer and learn to sing about great battle that are fought in far
off lands. At the age of 100 her parents were killed completing a job
for the leader of the village at the time, since her parents were
killed, the leader of the village at the time who deeply hated her
and her family instead of giving the house to her, he convinced the
village that her parents try to kill him and try to take over the
village, by doing so they forced her to leave the village and fend
from herself, she spent the next 137 training under an accomplished
archer and friend of her father's Dracozork to learn how to fight and
becoming proficient is the use of a bow and arrow, and in the art of
stealth so she could take up the manner that the leader of her
village had tried to destroy in the past. 

 

What
are they like (personality)?: -
 she is someone that is very accepting, and likes to learn about
lots of things asking lots of questions

What
are their ambitions?: -
 to build an intelligence guild 

Do
they have any special skills?: - mastered use of the bow lets
her hit a target at a record feet of 180 yards away.

What
are their weaknesses?: - they love to listen to stories so much so
that she will even stop fighting someone to listen to why they are
fighting her in the middle of combat

Give
us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - 
she stands a nice 5' 10 with long blond hair, and a pair of stunning
purple eyes. Her favorite type of outfit to wear is a green hoodie
with black pants her skin is a light yellow colour lighter than a
normal human like they have not had enough sun light type of look to
her

Anything
else you want to say about them?: - she has a habit of saying things
that some people may not like (the truth) but is always accepting of
everyone that she meets and will try her best to not judge people by
how they seem to be or by what other peoples opinions of them are.
Hates to fight but if she has to she will not flee from a fight and
will always use everything she has to win the fight at all costs but
the lives of her friends, she easily talk to nearly everyone but
trust no one till they show she a reason why she should trust her,
when she trust that person she will go to any and all lengths to
protect that person with her life.

 

note: i could not upload my skin with this post as i get error 403 i tried 4 times same error each time sorry.

[Aislin 4354]

 

Sadly, I must deny this. Please correct your mistakes and wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

1. Please go into more detail on your biography, for a 237 year-old Elf your character's story is very small. Try to read up on the server lore and include some places and names from within the world of Lord of the Craft.
2. You need a lot more detail in your personality and ambitions sections.
3. I understand you can't upload your skin, you should try using this website to search for your character's skin.

Again, please wait 24 hours before reapplying.

[Aislin 4354]

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