Primrose

No, my character was changed to look completely and flawlessly like another race but her race was not changed. I only used the other card so to remove meta. Also it was not changed by magic of the voidal type, more of an event back in early anthos. But I dont understand how this has anything to do with the current topic.

Yes, I will admit I am not the best writer and on paper I lack in making very convincing arguments. Though grasping at straws is not what I am doing. As for disliking Kalameet, He/she has wronged me in no way in which would cause me to not like him/her. You mistake my nit picking as trying to find someone that I do not like about their lore, because I do not like them. If this way the case i would also do it to every other lore they have written. As for taking a chill pill, Clearly, as with most things involving this server it is clear this is also not being taken seriously. As a great man once said " Whatever is worth doing at all, is worth doing well. " Saying that, I hold great hope in Kalameet as I have seen the work that they can produce so to see something like this, is frankly sad. *End of note*

Mana (Aka the void) is LoTc's force. In star wars they may not require a lexicon but they DO require a codex and a trained Jedi to read them. The names have been taken from clear sources that I was able to find after a 20 second Google search. I would say, add a bit more thought and creativity into this, maybe some one who first made it, maybe you found a book to go along with it, talking about how they might have been made. Along with that, I would say change the name. As for you believing me to have a "vendetta" I would ***** at you even if you were my best friend and you came up with this. I'm a logical person. Seen as mean and cold to the bone. :) I dont need to hold "vendetta's" I treat everyone equally. Edit : This is the type of lore I could see coming from someone new to the server. But not an aged experienced Lore master. A Lore master is someone who is meant to judge over what is good lore for the server. If they create lore, it is only common sense that they should know what they are making and have the ability and thought to add creativity and originality to it. Not to be called out on it by someone who isn't a loremaster.

How about this then, It's literally stolen from starwars (holocron) and Elder scrolls: Skyrim (lexicon). If the person(s) that are writing this lore want to call it their own. Make it original like everyone else does. I remember darkdragon getting bitched at for stealing someone else art work. This lore here is stealing Starwar's and Skyrim's idea's. Which I do believe are still copyrighted. Proof: IF they wish to write something creative and original to add to the server. Sure I say let them try. But I do not say let them simply steal someone else's creative idea and call it their own. -1

This seems to be far to futureish for the server. I dont know how many times I have been stonewalls by loremasters with the reason, no the server is not ready for it. I'm sorry but thinking as we are on a medieval role play server. -1

(( How does meta create fun for those around? Unless it's done completely ICly with maybe skype rp messager birds, I dont see how this isn't meta ))

Primrose chuckles to herself reading the note as she turns to walk back to her lab and continues her work to learn alchemy the correct way, through years of study and experimentation. (( How do you contact this guild it doesn't say where you are or anything, birds can't just find anyone, you have to find the person or at least know where that person is before your bird can find the person.)) (( Are you encouraging people to meta game knowing where your guild members are?))

OH LORD NO ... if these are accepted I will make it my life's mission to murder everyone of these.. I hate Dolls ... Nice lore. +1

WOAH... Katie RosenHeart is totally your kid :)

Cannot be tamed (too intelligent and hostile) Can be communicated with by druids (doesn’t mean they will though, are hostile ;) ) Honestly Anything in the world can be Tamed. No matter how smart it is or Hostile. If it's a baby and rised to be friendly sure it will still have out breaks and attack people but it could still be house trained. Saying it can't period is just dumb and there is no rp logic behind it. It's not smart enough to speak our language so it's not /that/ smart. Even Raven's can speak common and they can be tamed very easily. It seems like a very grumpy flying bird. +1

Here it is the long awaited "Primrose" Character Name Nicknames: Primrose, Rose, Bringer of Death, Doctor, Savor, Prim, And her elven name" Mediliyur. Age: 77 Gender: Female Race: Mali'aheral Status: Alive Description Height: 5'10 Weight: 130 pounds Body Type: Athletic Eyes: Purple Hair: Light Blonde Skin: Pale Markings/Tattoos: None that's Impure Health: healthy Personality: Friendly Yet, Insane Inventory: Bow, Normally 30 arrows, Stone sword (dagger), stack of bread. Further Details: Never likes to have money on her ( but loves to have stones in her money bags) Life Style Alignment*: Started off Lawful Neutral ( now i can't even begin to think) Deity*: All and none ew Impure Religion: All and none because Impure Alliance/Nation/Home: Wait I can't have more than one?!? Job/Class: Doctor / Ex-cleric / Farmer Title(s): None Profession(s): Farmer and Alchemist Special Skill(s): Great with a bow. People tell her she can charm nearly anyone she talks to. Flaw(s): Insane Magic* Current Status: Disconnected (Clerical) Mentalist Teir 3 (Arcane but doesn't see the need to use it) Yet to be connected (Druidic) Arch-type: Sub-Type: Rank: Weakness(es): Strength(s): Current Spell(s): Weaponry Fighting Style: Two dagger Fighting stance Trained Weapon[s]: Long bow, Short bow, Throwing daggers, Normal daggers, Medical tools, Traps if you count those as weapons, Strangle Wire. Favored Weapon: Daggers Archery: Very skilled, ( have hit a target over 100 blocks away before in mc) Biography Parents: Mother : Leona Maltac Siblings: None Children: No biology ( Adopted too many to post, you can look on her character page for the full family Extended Family: None Pet(s): Her Pet and trusty Raven" Rave-Rave" History That my friends is very long and with lots of mystery. If you would like to know it, it can be found out in rp with my character. Artwork I would LOVE to get some made for her but since I'm oocly Broke 24/7 and dont know anyone who is kind enough to do it for me. I dont have anything for my character.

Isn't Van'ayla good bye? I was really hoping for something that would tell them to have more babies ( to be blunt) as the mali'aheral are always asking their people to do that in marriage.

This is going to sound like an Odd one but here goes What would : "live long and prosper friend". It may sound cliche but I think it fits rather well with the Mali'aheral way of life as to make kids is seen as a good thing and living long lives is something we are good at. :)

(( There may or may not be rumors of classes on this starting up in 4.0 for the Mali'aheral. Hint hint nudge nudge.))

OH, I read the it though is ONLY eats a bit more than a teenager.. Making it sound to me that Teenagers don't eat a lot. thank you for clearing that up. I like it. I hope to see them around but not just causally everything chilling like a normal person, maybe it produces something that people want, that it can only give willingly. Since it is anti social this would allow players to get an rp party together and try to find and convince it to give that special thing up. (making it have to give it up willingly removes the fun of simply killing a non-offensive being, and gives a reward for people creatively role playing with it.)