char615

6/10 Minecraft characters? Really? Like... Really? U serious?

Then let's move everyone on LotC to GMT, Simple! Or... Not...

Dammit! Could the event either move to Saturday or Earlier by 1 or 2 Hours? I'm in GMT and 10pm is only long enough for me to be in the event for 20 minutes or so... (I'm krugmar's Champion) Another event missed...

Krogu Sits in the shadow of the palace, watching the speech and chuckles to himself. "Da speech be well un' good, but will da Uruks carry it out?"

(( Amazing writing, I was hooked from beginning to end~ Learning Orc culture, your character is on the right lines, the 'Tusk licking' Is just some Perverted Orc, nothing more. There was no holes in the story, it was good to read with a mix of simplistic and sophisticated writing, I cannot wait for the next chapter! ))

Pony Sad...

(( Krugmar is not a country )) Dis un sounds like A Whitewash! Speek Like an Uruk before lat have da honour uv Shamanism. -Krogu'Dom

Sorry, I could not read this font, My eyes get hazy and I het a headache.

The soulstones timer is extremely inaccurate, 'it says 10 seconds to teleport' and 4 seconds or 15 seconds later I teleport, Is this intentional, or what? I'm so pumped for 2.0, your coding is almost better than notch!

Krogu throws thebucket of piss at Nog and steals the food, before snatching the dwarf from Elimdor and throwing it at him. 'Stoopid...'

W(( Who is Zena and Kagish??? ))

That was unecessary... Don't comment if you dont have anything nice to say...

Dang, oh well! I think you should add an I somewhere in there, like put the O at the bottom right and the I at the top left? I dunno really. I know this was late but when bloodnight was banned I literally ran downstairs to the wine cellar and opened up a champagne bottle, before realising I hate champagne and that the bottle costs 150 pounds... :P

*=*Progress*=* Chapter 1: Done Chapter 2: Done Chapter 3: In progress Chapter 4: Not started yet If everything goes well I Will be done by new years!

I concur.

Chapter 1: Blood and Fire The sound of screams surrounded Krogu, blood and corpses were everywhere he looked, but the adrenaline was pumping, Krogu got up from the floor and looked for his sword, which seemed to have disappeared in the thick of the fighting, he looked up as a blast of purple set a tent and five soldiers alight, His gaze turned to Or'ta and his remaining Shamans, surrounded by Orc soldiers desperately firing bolts of flame to deter the soldiers, Krogu saw the trouble his leader was in and tried to run, but a jolt of pain shot up from his leg and he fell to the ground. He woke up with Death all around him, when he looked around he saw that two other orcs were lying into of him; dead, a tear welled up as he pushed the corpses off of him and he saw the true spectacle, Or'ta and his shamans' heads on bloodied spikes "N-Nub, Nub now, W-We were winnun' da Klomp, Whut happ-" a familiar burst of pain exploded from his legs, his eyes went hazy and he stumbled towards the gate, he suddenly saw two dark blotches coming towards him, that was when Krogu collapsed and closed his eyes, he heard the muffled voice of his mate, Shaklu and an unfamiliar voice, but Krogu was too weak to comprehend what they were saying and fell asleep. Chapter two: Exile Two years later "Krogu! Krogu wake up! Brekfast iz reddy!" Krogu opened his eyes and saw his mate's face above him, with an easy smile he sat up and kissed her belly "Tha child will be strong un Bub'hosh, Shaklu" "Yub, less just 'Ope dat it's Boy!" Krogu chuckled to himself and got out of bed, "Any attacks ur raids last nigh'?" he yawned, Shaklu's face suddenly turned red "Uur... Dere wuz Ash measly attak, nub body wuz klomped, but..." "But wub?" "Dey... Took... Your bruddah, Skago" A blind rage took hold of Krogu and he picked his bed clear off the ground and threw it at Shaklu, luckily she ducked and the bed ripped a hole in his tent, Krogu's anger left him and he sunk to the floor "Krogu! Giddup yah skahin' Shara!" yelled Shaklu as she rushed over to him, Krogu was breathing heavily but managed to speak in a croaky tone "Me will hunt dem, ta da end uv Aegis...". A week later, Krogu headed out into the woods to look for his only surviving brother, Skago'Dom, he knew the journey ahead would be long and brutal, but he never knew he would never see his Family again... Chapter 3: The Amulet Months had Passed, And Krogu Had not found His Brother, Eventually he gave up and stumbled upon a small township called RastVale, after asking several passers-by if he saw his brother unsucessfully, he retired to A Nearby inn and Drowned out his sorrow with Ale, He was staring into his 3rd Ale Tankard when He heard a Whisper from behind him, When he turned around there was nothing there, But when He turned his head back to The Ale, a Hooded Stranger Was sitting in the Chair on the opposite end Of His table "Whut duz lat wunt?" Grumbled a Drunk Krogu. "Oh... Nothing much... But I do Have something you May Want, for a Price Ofcourse..." "My Bruddah? Lat Have Him?" "No, No... But I have something that May help with your Search." "Well, Wud?!" Krogu Stood Up from the Table and Leaned Over to The Stranger, His Horrible breath made the Stranger's nose Wrinkle in disgust "Come With... By God That smells... Come With me Please". Krogu Reluctantly Followed the Stranger Outside the Town, Expecting a Trap Krogu Readied his Axe, but to his surprise the Stranger Beckoned for Krogu to Enter a tent, Covered by Weeds and Wisteria Plants, Inside was a Woman, Also Hooded with a Glass Sphere and a Golden amulet with A Purple Amethyst engraved into it, Krogu Seemed to Like the Amulet and attempted to Haggle with the Man for It, To his dissapointment the Man Turned down every offer and Told Krogu to Sit In The Empty chair opposite the Woman, Moments later, The Hooded man Left the Tent and left Krogu And The Woman Alone in Silence, After Five Minutes of Nothing but The Hooting of an Owl, The Woman broke the silence "So..." She Croaked in a Haggard old Voice "You Wish to Find Your Brother?" Krogu was Startled "How Dz lat Kno dat?!" "The Fire Tells me alot of Things, Come" The Woman Beckoned Towards a burning fire at The left of the tent. "The fires never lie, I may Be able to Find your Brother, or Give you a Guide of Sorts" The Woman Let out some uncomprehendable words and The Fire grew to a Larger size, She Then Started to Throw bones into the Fire, And Saw Three Things. "First... A Stranger Returns To his homeland, Second... A Group will meet on the Field Of battle" The Crone cleared her Throat "Three... A Child Shall never be Born...". ((TL;DR: Clan Dies, Brother Stolen, Crone Predicts, Krogu Returns. <-- If You Read that you are one lazy Bones!)) Again give me tips on how I can Improve! **Done On Iphone, no Fancy Fonts used**

Dun dudun dun dun.... (( lol ))

(( God damn, this should have been done 7 months ago, now we won't have 'I cuff and kill, for the thrill' guards! ))

Eeh... Just Make it about 20% Cooler. :3 As The Person Who Stole Created The Black Hand Logo, I Feel Inclined to Make, Or atleast help With the New One. Edit: Maybe This For a Signature? If You Can get rid Of the Background, Cos I cant :P

(( *Le Sigh* I wish GMs Could just be In Power again, It went smoother ))

Krogu walks for many leagues north, or so he thought and spies a familiar feint glow in the distance, thinking it could be a hut or campfire, he shuffles through the snow towards the light and sees a familiar looking house and a feint rattling if bells again. 'Me can't uv been ere before, surely...' Krogu trudged through the snow and catches a glimpse of an upright nan and two orcs sitting on the ground eating. Mustering up courage, Krogu strolls over to the gathering. 'Scuse me, duz lat know were da nearest town iz? Me a liddle lost un need direcshunz' Krogu awaits a reply, tapping his feet in the snow impatiently.