Wizard

Denied. Asulon has no gates. It is the whole countryside. Read up on the lore and include that in your biography. For instance, read about established Dwarven places to be born and live in. Use accepted lore, do not make up your own. Everything else looks pretty good. You could spend some time refining your Open-response and that is about it. Do not re-apply for 24 hours.

Name: WizardInABox RP name: William Goldhand, Grand Merchant of Karik Experience: I have helped build places like Galahar back in Aegis (I was in the original group) and even started on my own town, which was stopped due to Al'Khazar being taken over. In Asulon, I was one of the first people to work on Arethor when EzeTarus was still the king. For the dwarves, I helped with various projects around Kal'Alras when the new renovations came about. I have also built some personal houses in Asulon and Aegis. Also, some minor projects in Karik such as the vault for Hiebe and the kingdom. If you played on Aryon's server while LOTC was down, I also made a small underground dwarf fort with some dwarves on there. Pictures of previous builds: (must have at least three) This is just something I started when the Mage Guild asked for a possible build for their guild. It is just the entrance way I was designing. This is a sort of throne room I made in singleplayer. Small, yet distinctly looks Dwarven. Here is a mine I was making for an adventure map of sorts. Pretty basic, but still looks kind of cool to me. I cannot find screenshots of my previous builds in Galahar and other random places in Aegis, but I am sure you have seen the cities before in your travels. I can however provide a few of my concepts. Below are a few from this thread I started a few weeks ago. -> Here <- Also, from my app for 3.0 building. -> Here <- Here is a quick build video I made of a Dwarven underground fortress I made recently (Not too big yet, because I am still adding on.) Here are additional screenshots to the entrance of the Dwarven entrance above.

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Accepted.

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Accepted. Good app and good example of your role-play. Please read some lore of Asulon and get to know things while you are waiting to be implemented.

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Accepted. Good app. You were thorough in your corrections and your high elf will cause some interesting RP. Remember, magic must be applied for.

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Hearing Tortek, William stares at him and then replies to his rebukes to Dom. T'is beh no toime fer jokin'. T'e humans 'ave attempted ter murder our vereh own king. Ye should take t'is matteh more seriously. Weh all 'ave a right ter beh angry.

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Denied. Your character is somewhat a power-gamed creation. At such a young age, he already has mastered the 3 major weapons and can take down an orc with practically no fight at all. To master one weapons takes years of practice. Most characters, especially a human of young age, only master one weapon. Also, if you read a little about dwarven lore, they are not especially fond of the humans. Usually only dwarves are allowed in the city. Maybe don't have your character go live with 3 different races, especially racist ones. Also, if you would correct some of your grammar mistakes such as capitalizing I's that would be great. Post again in 24 hours.

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Denied. Double Post.

Angered, William speaks out in the council. Dis beh an outrage ter t'e Empire! Ah say weh end it now an' start ah mighty campaign.

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