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  1. Sorry but you have been denied for several reasons! For once you failed to edit your application within the 24 hours given. Fear not this isn't the end in joining our wonderful server but for your next application improve on these areas. If you need any help please feel free to message me. Your roleplaying definition is really vague and your metagaming definition is wrong. For help on how to correct this please look at this but do not plagiarize http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/RoleplayingWhen you have time to finish your biography make sure you have 2 paragraphs and include lore such as towns and recent events. This link will help you http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans If you need help please feel free to message me and I shall point you towards the right direction. Remember we are also currently in Vailor so keep that in mind when adding server lore. Please also expand your strengths and weaknesses a bit moreFinally please find a skin that is suitable. You may reapply to the server in 24 hours from the time of this denial.
  2. Sorry but you have been denied for several reasons! For once you failed to edit your application within the 24 hours given. Fear not this isn't the end in joining our wonderful server but for your next application improve on these areas. If you need any help please feel free to message me. Your definitions are somewhat correct but please elaborate more. Help for this matter can be found here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying Good examples can be found here but remember do not plagiarize.Please expand you biography so you at least have two paragraphs.You need to add more lore into your application such as city names and events. Check this link for some more information http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans Remember we are currently in Vailor so keep that in mind when relating lore.Your biography is also very cliché along the lines of parents dying. Please fix this and try make your application more normal. Also please do not use demons in your biography as again its just too cliché. If you need any help in this matter please feel free to message me.Please also change your ambition from this avenging seeking belief to kill a demonYou may reapply to the server in 24 hours from the time of this denial
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  4. MC Name: greener161 RP Name: Piers of Lorraine Skype: greener161 I want to be a (ghost, Graven): Graven
  5. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  6. Welcome to Lord of the Craft!!! Good work on fixing the mistakes especially with the definitions. Please wait patiently until you are implemented to server. If you have any questions feel free to message me.
  7. Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted. Please present your application in the proper format which is found here https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/125096-the-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/ Please space out each question, check other applications to see how they've laid their application out. If you need any help doing this feel free to pm me. Your biography is good but needs more lore. Since you're a High Elf I suggest reading this http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Haelun'or to include more lore such as more locations than just the silver city. Remember we are currently in Vailor though. Your meta gaming and powergaming definitions are wrong the correct examples can be found here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying but remember to phrase your answer in your own way. Do not plagiarize. Your biography is also slightly cliché under the lines of avenging a family member and a dead parent. Try and expand your character a bit more than just seeking revenge on a wolf. The way your character also kills the wolf may be considered powergaming. A wolf of that size would definitely put up a good fight. If you need any suggestions or help with this feel free to message me. Finally please fix some grammar mistakes such as capital letters.You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further.
  8. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  9. Welcome to Lord of the Craft!!! Good examples for your definitions and I see you will have fun rping with your friend Desuberniis. As a Dwarf myself I welcome you to our community. Please wait patiently until you are implemented to server. If you have any questions feel free to message me.
  10. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  11. Welcome to Lord of the Craft!!! Great application! Good use of lore and I like the link to runesmithing which is very Dwarven! Please wait patiently until you are implemented to server. If you have any questions feel free to message me.
  12. Sorry but you have been denied for several reasons! Fear not this isn't the end in joining our wonderful server but for your next application improve on these areas. If you need any help please feel free to message me. Expand your metagaming definition you can check the wiki for more information.Your biography is well written except you do not have any of the sever lore. I suggest reading this on the wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans and by checking the human sub forums. However do not mistake the age of your character in relation to past events in which your character would not be alive.Also space out your biography so two paragraphs are visiblePlease refrain from being an assassin and change your ambition. Please also do not include parent's death cliché to drive your character's ambitions and motives.Your skin also does not fit this server please find an acceptable replacement. You may reapply to the server in 24 hours from the time of this denial
  13. Piers of Lorraine resides hidden within Oren as he scowls at this news "Roswell is such a snake."
  14. Name: Odin Ireheart Race: Mountain Dwarf Residence (City): Kal'Akash Candidate: Rhewen Frostbeard
  15. Odin walks down the empty streets he rubs his beard observing no one is nearby. He finds Vidar standing alone next to the gate. "Meh bruther dun lose 'ope weh need tu stay strung dose w'u 'ave left ar' cuwurds. Dey flee da orkish 'orde and da 'umans wrath. Tugethur in uniteh we' s'all stay strung."
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