Kirrekith

It's very nice. You definitely have a good outline and the like. As feedback I would tell you to push your poses. Look for references for good 'line of action', and try to pose your concepts in interesting ways. Right now, what the golem is actually doing in the illustration is sort of up to interpretation. Make your own concept and personality of the character you're creating further definable by the pose you choose to conceptulize them in.

my thought is that u shud draw something for me for free