MonkeyCoffee

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application has been... Excellent application! Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you. If you have any questions, pop me a PM!

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been... After reading through your application, I've come to the conclusion to deny your application for the following reasons: Please elaborate exactly what kind of roleplay experiences you've had. You did not post on the Minecraft Forums. Even though you agreed to the question "Have you read the Orcish lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:", you did not use any lore in your application. Here is a link to the official wiki so you can find some lore! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage Orc names do not have second or third names. The closest you could get to a second name is having a Clan name next to your name. Your biography is short, try to expand on it. Parents being murdered is very cliché and overused. Try to think of something different! You cannot kill everyone in your city on your own, that is powergaming. Plus, you never said that he trained in his biography, so I wonder how he would be able to kill an entire city on his own. There is no "Gorblakum citiy". You cannot start out as a general, all titles need to be obtained in-game. I don't think that you know exactly what the "Skills" question means. This is not an RPG, this is an RP server. Can he climb well? Can he cook good? That is the sort of stuff that is supposed to be in that question. What you have right now sounds more like RPG skills. There is no "Goddess Farinka", and you can also not make a fire sword. Also, he can kill anyone with his archery in one shot? In your biography, you haven't said a single thing about him training archery. All of your Open Response Questions need to be greatly expanded, they're far too short, create at least an entire paragraph and add dialogue. Your first Open Response Question contains powergaming. You give the Orc no time to react to you. You cannot eat a Halfling in your third Open Response Question. This requires evil 3A (cannibalism), which you need to create a Villain Application for, and for that, you need to be on the server for at least a week. Various spelling and grammatical mistakes are found throughout your entire application. If you can, put the application through Word and check the spelling. I know it is a lot, and I do not want to come over as rude or something, as I'm just trying to help you! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instand denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

The spawn looks so sexy. And it's so nice to see the Maeghan and Higgsy shrines!

Sounds awesome. Good work, pop.

Name of Dryad, Greek word and English meaning: Her name will be Akomi, which means 'still' in English. Type of Dryad: She will be a Pine Dryad Picture of Skin:

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been... Put on Pending. Don't worry, it isn't denied, just fix one small thing found in your application. The problem is, you didn't post on the Minecraft Forums. Please do so within 24 hours from this post or face denial. If you have done so, pop me a PM! I just noticed you did not wait 24 hours after your last application. This means that it is denied. Sorry for the inconvenience. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been... After reading through your application, I've decided to deny your application for the following reasons: Even though you agreed to include lore in your biography, you haven't. Please do so, here is a helpful link to the wiki to help you find some! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage Your Open Response Questions are too short, expand on them and also add some dialogue to them! Overall, a good first try for an application! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instand denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

I love you. :*