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Keldrith

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  1. ACCEPTED! Welcome to Lord of the Craft, may you have a fantastic adventure~
  2. A ghost would tap his chin as he observed this, nodding after the gravens comment "It actually worked.."
  3. Pending This application has been placed on pending for 24 hours, please make all revisions within the given time or it will be denied. -Your application was very good and you do seem like you'd fit in well! But there are a few small issues that you must revise in your biography. One of which is that your character cannot learn any type of magic before actually entering the server. You must do this in roleplay rather than using an application to get all the magic before actually learning it. And assuming you were allowed to, I'd watch the power-gamey aspects of the app as well. 'Destroyed the entire army using dark magic' for example would be considered powergaming..., but it should not be in the bio at all for the reason stated before, so please revise this. - Your biography takes place in 3.0! Currently we live in Vailor, meaning you must update your biography to match up with your characters age... or simply change your age. It wouldn't make sense for your character to be 22. You can read more about vailor here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor - Your character has brown hair and is a High Elf, this wouldn't make sense with our server lore and I'd reccomend reading this to better your knowledge on your chosen race! http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/High+Elves -Also, you mentioned some strong ties between your character and the Druidic Order, since it is a player-run group things they do to your character would have to be done in character, so when you mentioned that they bannished you from using magic etc, it didn't really make sense in this sense. Other than that, you are good to go! So just make these revisions and you will be accepted soon~
  4. This application is denied for incorrect format, please wait 6 hours before reapplying. I strongly suggest using Google Docs or something of the sort for applications, as we don't have the best tools for such things, however it is very possible and almost as easy to just make one on the forums. Just make sure you don't click the 'Submit Post' button before you're actually done with your app if you do choose to use the site for editing your app. Just make another app in 6 hours using the correct format here:
  5. Denied I like your enthusiasm and vigour, but we have an application you must fill out if you wish to join us. It's a bit long, but it will ensure that your character is completely set-up for the Isles of Vailor! Please wait 6 hours before reapplying~ You may visit the application form here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/125096-the-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/
  6. Denied You have been denied for the following reasons, if you have any questions feel free to PM me on the forums and I will get back to you Asap! Please wait a full 24 hours before reapplying and Merry Krugsmas. - Your roleplaying definition is incorrect, refer to the following link for revision. - Your metagaming definition is incorrect, please refer to the following link for revision. - Your powergaming definition is slightly incorrect, please use this link to revise your definitions! http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying - Your biography has little server lore, please use this link to research some more! And with how old your character is, it is unlikely that he would actually catch the plague, as that was something that happened in The Fringe, and the more recent one only happened to void magic users. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor - Your strengths and weaknesses are unbalanced, please revise these.
  7. Denied Your appication has been denied for the following reasons, if you have any questions or comments feel free to PM me on the forums! I can also help you with your app if you ask! Please wait 24 hours before reapplying and Merry Krugsmas!~ - Your Roleplaying definition is incorrect, please revise this using the following link. - Your Metagaming definition is kinda correct, but it needs some revision. Please be more specific. - Your powergaming definition is getting there! But it is incorrect, please use this link for your definitions! http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying - After reading through your biography, I noticed some power-gamey elements and I also would like you to note that your character can't automatically be born into a family of power, it must be something that happens within the server in RP. Revise that part of your application. Everything else looks good though so you should be accepted in no time!
  8. Denied You have been denied for the following reasons, if you have any questions or comments feel free to PM me on the forums and I will get back to you Asap! Please wait 24 hours before reapplying~ - Your powergaming definition is a bit off! Give this link a read and try to revise it. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying?responseToken=7bf71c463da8f8453e0aab14064c0d08 - Your biography is a little on the short side! Please extend it a bit. - Please add more of the server lore in your biography, you can look up more about the lore here. I will add some links that will help with your character, since he is so old you might want to consider using lore from when he was born, to current day. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Modern+History - Your weaknesses and strengths are not well balanced, please add some more to each section.
  9. Lovin the new change. 

  10. ... Bring player Monks back~ You're lettin me down coach.
  11. DENIED You have been denied for the following reasons, if you have any questions about your application or the wiki feel free to PM me on the forums and I will see what I can do for ya'. Please wait at least 6 hours before reapplying! Your format is incorrect! Please copy and paste this one and make a new application once the 6 hours is up, and be sure to fill out all the questions~
  12. DENIED You have been denied for the following reasons, if you have any questions or comments feel free to PM me and I will get back to you as soon as I can. I ask that you at least wait 24 hours before reapplying. - Your roleplaying, metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, please refer to the following link for guidance: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying - Your biography is too short, please make it atleast a decent 2 paragraphs. lengthen it during your revisions~ - Your biography contains no server lore, please research our server a bit and look into the history, it's a great way to find out if you're really interested or not. Give this link a try and be sure to add some lore you find into your biography. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor (You can also just browse the wiki! Check 'To New Players' http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page ) - Your biography takes place in the real world, we are a fantasy roleplaying server and we have our own world and lore to follow, refer to previous link for more on this. Your character must take place in our world (Vailor).
  13. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
  14. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.
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