MinimanTheFirst

I've seen both the OOC and IC for MuseOfHeart and her characters. My char, Jayko Azura II, has known her IC for quite a while now. And he's gotten to know both Marie and Bloody Marie (Don't ask how. But he knows). Contrary to popular belief, people who spend more time than needed on one char CAN tell OOC from IC. That aside, I think Marie would do great as a villain. On the condition she doesn't die. But that aside, you got my vote as a friend who knows you know how to really do good villain rp in terms of being a madwomen. +1

[!] Name: Jayko Azura II Do I accept my nomination for: Guide [] Caregiver [√] Explanation: I tend to help others in my own spare time. And I have my family to testify that. But that aside, I accept my nomination [!]

[!] Name: Jayko Azura II Nomination for Guide: Mary O'Nett/Azura Nomination for Caregiver: N/A [!]

Name: Jayko Azura II Nomination for Guide: Mary O'Nett Nomination for Caregiver: N/A

Name: Jayko Azura II Do I accept my nomination for: Guide [] Caregiver [√] Explanation: I'll explain in my speech later. But for the time being, let's just say that I tend to care for others as it's Rule 1 of being an Azura.

Jayko Azura II.... Well... This | \/

OOC Minecraft Name: MinimanTheFirst Timezone: Mountain Standard Time (USA) Skype: MinimanTheFirst (Jarrod) Anything you'd like us to know?: Ask me in OOC for questions IC Name: Jayko Azura II Age: 28 Race: Human Gender: Male Alignments: Lawful/Neutral Good Skills: Master Swordsman above all things. Other than that: Jack of All Trades Anything you'd like us to know?: Ask me in OOC if you want to know any more details

Jayko Azura II reads the note, still recovering from being attacked by 2 Undead characters. "I'll take this with a huge grain of salt until I get proof otherwise." He walks away

Bring. Back. Status. Updates. Now.

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Jayko Azura II hears the news, reaching for his sword and cloak. "Time for another adventure."

IGN: [Guitar Man] Jayko Azura II OOC: MinimanTheFirst I got Skype: MinimanTheFirst (Jarrod) Why I want to join: It looks like an amazing rp opportunity in my opinion. And it reminds me of my days back in Valles. When it was actually running.

Name: Jayko Azura II Vocation: Soldier, Guardian, Explorer by default

Title says all, folks! Basically, this forum is dedicated for those people who want to know what would happen if (Name Here) was in the server. This is how I want you guys to do these posts: So I'll start with the one and only... Chuck Norris What if Chuck Norris was put in LotC? About Chuck Norris: All you need to know about him is to watch this short clip: Chuck Norris Logs On... Everyone cowers in fear as they see that Chuck Norris has entered their world. All the nations, for fear that Chuck Norris is allied with an enemy nation, ensue world peace. But then someone stole Chuck Norris's belt. He was never heard from again. OOC: He's Chuck Norris. It just had to be done. And why wouldn't that happen if Chuck Norris logs on?

I know Merek and I are 2 active members. Don't know about the other 2. (Unless for some reason, Oliver doesn't realize that we're active). Other than that, ABOUT FREAKING TIME

The war was getting annoying. I Approve

That was the first draft original "quest". However, looking back at the story, he knows his mothers murderer was killed and hasn't really felt any initiative to avenge them as I never even hinted that. Instead, the "quest" was changed to one of finding answers. Hope that explains that part. As for anything being cliche:

"In a world of great leaders, it is truly rare to find a leader who inspires us to be greater...." Jayko has only recently heard of the death of Jon. His pain was greater than some. After all, he served under him since the beginning days of Valles. To add to that, he had heard of 5 deaths now of people he knew, 3 of which he witnessed first-hand. But despite all the pain he felt, he found a sense of peace. Jon was a rare leader, after all. Standing up and exiting his tent, there was only one thought in Jayko's head: "The greatest gift a great leader can ask for is for his followers to become greater."

I guess you're right. And you were right in how it looked like i was making a novel. On the original server I made this char on (Massivecraft), Jayko was nothing more than a swordsman who wanted to avenge the death of his parents. I suppose it's only appropriate that I rp that. In other words, I'm restarting the entire history. I will keep some things but erase all sections related to magic. If it was in the original first draft bio, I'm keeping it. That means that yes, he'll still keep his knowledge of Ancient Elven and his weapon prowess. The original draft also still had him as the son of Nobles (which he will still be working towards restoring his status (eventually)). However, he has more weaknesses such as falling apart when things go wrong and not taking failure well. Also, while the prophesy was in the original, I might remove it depending on what you guys think (Although with magic removed, it doesn't seem likely it will stay). So here's a basic overview of the clean slate: - No Magic - Flaws including: Being unsure of himself at times (thus causing a bit of doubt and loss of focus), Hates failure, and loses focus when things don't work out. - Most of everything else stays relatively the same - History up to after the death of Jacoba will stay (minus anything magical related) I will have the finalized version by tonight (it's currently about 10:47 where I am just to give a perspective on how long that'll take).

So in other words, i have to somehow get in Clerical Order to rp with War Cleric (According to what I saw in the article)? Im just trying to clarify things. In the wiki, "In fights against the darker beings... the clerics receive the gift of magical powers to aid them", " While it is not necessary to be in the clerical order to receive the blessing of the patrons", and "While clerical healers have been seen outside the order, most if not all of the war clerics are part of it", make it seem like War Clerics don't truly necessarily have to be part of the Order (Although it seems highly recommended for them to be a part of it with the "most if not all"). I'm just saying that this part makes it seem possible for my char to be able to use war cleric powers. I'm not trying to make it look like your wrong. As stated earlier, I'm just clearing things up. If you want a preview of what i wanted for my char, the powers (until I think of something else) would be just a shield and those light balls being bigger than they currently are (to about the size of a baseball or tennis ball), emitting more light (so a portable torch), and making for a good projective attack (which after typing that and reading the wiki, is Battle-Cleric magic (Battle used interchangeably with War))

Changing Guantlets from indestructible to extremely durable (they've been sitting in a cave for 1000 years. And they didn't rust during then). Also, no, I'm not part of the clerical order. But according to the official wiki: "While it is not necessary to be in the clerical order to receive the blessing of the patrons, the man or woman has to find a way to learn how to control and use such blessing."Jayko hasn't found a way to control it yet except, as said before, as a small ball that does nothing more than provide some light in the dark (if any). If you don't believe me, here's the wiki article: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Cleric+Magic

Notice: Will have the "Official" Story up within 5 hours. It's up Notable edits: - Dropped the Praetoria Race altogether. The town from the "Unofficial" Story will be a human town where only the royal family is referred to as the "Praetoria" (Note: Praetoria comes from the Latin Word "Praetorian", which was used to denote very high-ranking citizens in Ancient Rome). Also, the pale skin will be a characteristic - Lucy will go from being an Aengul to being a mystical entity, although if a Loremaster deems it appropriate, I can allude to her being an Aengul. - Jayko was granted his ability to use Light Magic AFTER he received the mark on his hand. He was also granted that by Lucy instead of being born with it. Other than that, the Story will stay almost the same. However, if anyone else notices some inconsistencies, merely say so and I'll fix the story. Future Plot Twists (Dont Meta): - In the section marked "Beginning", I never said whether or not Harold died. I might play on that by creating a story arc where he's very much alive. - Maybe (only if it became a server event or something), There will be a section marked as "Fugitive", where the Human king was either assassinated or kidnapped (preferably the latter) and Jayko was framed for it. I leave the rest for you to figure out. (NOTE: WILL REQUIRE STAFF APPROVAL FOR THIS SO I HIGHLY DOUBT IT WILL HAPPEN)

I'm not discouraged at all. By the way, assuming that everything was lore compliant, would this be a good biography? (Using the edits I made outside of the history instead of the original version.)

It's understandable. As much as I don't want to get rid of the history I already wrote, I want it to be compatible for the time being. As such, I will put the original history plan under a "Unofficial" title (With the official being under that.) This is not an application (Which was approved months ago). For that, see: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/104419-minimans-2nd-application/ That's an easy fix. I'll downgrade the "Memorized every possible language" to "Memorized Ancient Elven" as that appeared to have no issues that I am aware of. I'll also downgrade the trained with every weapon to about 5 or 6 for variety. I can also change it to "One of the best" considering that if he only trained with 5-6 different weapons, he should have mastered at least one (in my honest opinion). Changing history to fit with this. I want to keep the magic part so I'll think of a way it was granted to me (Maybe sometime after that mark on my right hand appeared?). For the "knowing every language", see the previous quote i answered. As for the schizophrenia, I have an idea to make a goblin with that (He also speaks intelligible language although he understands basic english). No comment. I hope this clears up a few things. I will edit the profile later when I have some more free time. To answer the question that will arise of "Why do you still have your old history and why are you adding stuff to that?", here it is: I want to keep that in case a lore master happens to come across this. If they approve it, . If not, . Hope this clears a few things up.

Character Name: Jayko Lokomo Azura II Nicknames: Jayko, Jay Age: 26 Gender: Male Race: Northerner Human Status: Still Alive Description Height: 5'9" Weight: 210 Body Type: Endomorph Eyes: Hazel Hair: Dark Brown Skin: Fair Markings/Tattoos: Birthmark on his right hand shaped exactly like the Azura Family Symbol (Proof of his heritage) Health: Perfect Personality: Think Luke Skywalker Inventory: His ancestor's gauntlets (made from an extremely durable alloy), scabbard inlayed with gold, and The Praetorian Sword (made of same alloy as the gauntlets) Further Details: Life Style Alignment*: Somewhere between Lawful Good and Neutral Good (While he isn't too willing to break laws, he will if needed to) Deity*: The Creator Religion: Guess. Alliance/Nation/Home: Anyone who follows the Light/The Fringe/The Human Capital Job/Class: Ex-Noble (No one but him knows though) Soldier Title(s): Valiant (as he's in the Valiant Company) Profession(s): Jack of all Trades. Special Skill(s): His never-give-up attitude, One of the best swordsman back in Abresi, Memorized Ancient Elven, Peak physical/spiritual condition, Superior senses, Luck factor Flaw(s): Luck just lets him survive, not win (Only wins if that's the only way he can survive), Doesn't accept failure, tends to break down when things don't go as planned (even though he can manage) Weaponry Fighting Style: Uses 1-handed weapons but can usually adjust to fight with anything (and everything) at his disposal. Trained Weapon[s]: Swords, Axes, Staffs, Daggers, Spears, Hand-to-Hand, and Bows/Crossbows Favored Weapon: Broadsword, Crossbow, Bo Staff, Hand-to-Hand Archery: Exceptional Biography Parents: Harold Enargo Azura (Unknown), Anathela Azura (Deceased), Jacoba Wallus (Deceased), Yanessa Wallus (Deceased) Siblings: N/A Children: N/A Extended Family: N/A Pet(s): Hope the Spotted Owl (Alive), Geoff the Tabby Cat (Deceased) History The Upbringing Discovery of the Tomb Death of One. Promise of another. Note: Artwork Working on it [spoiler][img]http://