Disheartened

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. There are some areas in your backstory where I don’t quite understand what you’re trying to say. https://app.grammarly.com/ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! For metagaming - give an example to accompany your definition! For powergaming - just remember that you must include an *attempt* in proper combat emotes, you cannot emote that you did hit someone ever, even if you say you slightly missed https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Alicia#9441 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Pending

Changed Status to Under Review Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…? As well, for the Character Biography, I see that you’ve referenced another player character. You will need permission from them to be able to say that you’ve interacted with them. You can send me that over discord or forum message. Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Alicia#9441 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

Destroying the ISA? They're on your side, girl! P.s. I wish I never saw this I've had the song stuck in my head for an hour now.

As a nursing student, I love you for this. Seriously, I don’t have the patience to even try medical RP because it’s utter **** when 99% of people don’t know what the **** they’re on about.

He looks like you except hot... and completely different.

OOC MC Name: Disheartened Skype[Group Chat Notifications, if you're already added, good]: already in Do you have Teamspeak?[microphone not required] (y/n): Yes I do RP Name: Annebelle Colborn Race: Human Age: 26 Religion: Cannonist How much are Ruthern Bannermen payed a week?: 100 minas I, Annebelle Colborn do hereby swear that my life is pledged to those of House Ruthern, till my oath released, or death taketh me, I shall serve the Lords and Ladies of House Ruthern with my utmost capabilities. I will hold true and steadfast amongst my comrades, to protect the honor of my Liege and myself, I pledge. God Save my soul if I break my oath.