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AfricanGlasses

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  1. Hi again, please leave out major events In your characters life, such as personality and future heroic tests that would determine your course of roleplay. I'm giving you a 24 hour change to do this because I did not properly serve your last warning. Your writing is functional however if you ignore this final warning I will have to deny you. I will be gone for the early portion of tomorrow. Feel free to send me a message once you're done
  2. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.
  3. This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum.
  4. Going to be throwing this application on [PENDING] You have 24 hours to make the following changes. If you need more time let me know and we can accommodate such! Changes: 1. your roleplaying definition needs to be beefed up and enhanced, likewise with your powergaming definition. Remember powergaming isn't only pertaining to fights or violence! 2. Your ambitions. Can you think of another? If you need any help whatsoever, please feel free to message me via forums and I'll help you asap! Cheers, xoxo
  5. Hey there, so you can't have this much action with other players. You are hinting that this roleplay actually happened. We encourage biographies in applications to be vague... filled with dreams and hopes. Your timeframe of 24 hours is up, however it was a simple mistake in the last portion of your biography. For this, I'll give you 2 hours to fix. Just a hint, without this last paragraph, you will be accepted. Cheers, if you need help let me know! xoxo
  6. The applicant has an EXTRA HOUR. If no communication arises, they will be put on denied and will have to re-apply. The initial timeframe of 24 hours is up. If any extension is needed, please let me know as soon as possible.
  7. This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum.
  8. After 24 hours and communication between both myself and the applicant, I do not believe that the biography is sufficient enough for proper acceptance onto the server. Your biography is not lacking lore, it is simply incorrect at times. For instance, There is no nation known as Alban (rather a religious capital for the nation of haense. Your biography also alludes to 'pvp' instead of combat and gives irrational thoughts that aren't exactly conventional for the server. Also, when did High Elves and Ologs invade? I do not ever recall that happening nor reading it on ANY wiki page. Please go ahead and take a few hours to actually look over the wiki page and write out your biography in a factual and flowing manner. If you need any help just give me a buzz via forum pm. Thank you! have a great day.
  9. Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.
  10. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.
  11. On behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a white-listed player. Please wait patiently as a staff member will implement you. In the meantime feel free to browse our wiki or if you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums. Our AT Discord is tailored especially to assist new players. To get in you simply have to click the link provided. Please stop by and say hi! New Player Discord Also be sure to check out the New For you, New player guide!
  12. Under review PENDING: Going to be putting your application on [PENDING] You have 24 hours to make the following changes UNLESS you need more time in which case 'pm' me via forums and we can work out a schedule. Changes: 1. Your biography can't reference other fantasy platforms. 2. You need to include at least 1 piece of lore from LotC (wiki page is a great start!) 3. You cannot be well known. Remember nobody knows you on the server so it'd be silly to start your journey already notable. Use your story as a commoner with your application to grow into whatever you'd like to grow into in game! If you need any assistance, poke me via forums and I'll be happy to help! Have a great day.
  13. PENDING: Hey there, going to be putting your application on [Pending] You have 24 hours to make the following changes. if you need anymore time for any reason, please message me via forums. Changes: 1. Just add a piece of lore (from the wiki) into your biography. What cities have you been to? Where are you planning to go next? if you need any help with anything, do not hesitate to contact me! More than happy to help you!
  14. Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.
  15. Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.
  16. Under Review On behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a white-listed player. Please wait patiently as a staff member will implement you. In the meantime feel free to browse our wiki or if you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums. Our AT Discord is tailored especially to assist new players. To get in you simply have to click the link provided. Please stop by and say hi! New Player Discord Also be sure to check out the New For you, New player guide!
  17. Under Review PENDING Hey there! I'm going to be putting your application on pending and not because you've done anything incorrect, I just need you to beef up your biography just a bit. You knocked the hard part out, which is adding a piece of lore (which you did by mentioning Santegia), but just throw in a personal touch, make sure that you are giving a wholesome story about your character! Why does she feel excluded? Why does she want her memories back? How does she know she had any memory to begin with? Simple stuff like that. Super easy fix, maybe 1-3 more sentences and you'll be good to go! Also, the year is 1633. If your character was born in 1600 she'd be 33, not 27 c: If you need any help whatsoever, feel free to reach me on my personal discord at jackmmills30582 OR on forums through PM's. Have a great day.
  18. Under Review PENDING: I've placed your application on pending. This means that you have 24 hours (from my comment) to make the following changes. If for whatever reason you need more time please feel free to PM me via forums! Changes: 1. Your biography needs to include at least one piece of lore. Instead of utilizing the biography to depict who you ate and self constructed opinions of your own character, tell us a story. Let me know where he is from, what he likes, and dislikes... His experiences (to a minimum because you haven't roleplayed your character yet) and some general information about the places he is from. Please, remove the orc killed your parents clause within this portion. It is overused and a cliché. Your parents can die if you wish them to, however use a creative way! 2. Your powergaming definition is seemingly correct, but just know that powergaming isn't all about fighting and that it can be through all types of roleplay! If you need help editing these two portions of your application, feel free to reach me on discord @ jackmmills#0582 OR through my forum account. I'm more than happy to help you! Have a great day.
  19. Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.
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