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Danger? What Danger? All I see is a pack of happy wolves here to greet us with tooth and claw!!!

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Out-Of-Character Information


The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - FroYoSloMo
How old are you?: - 14
What time-zone do you live in?: - Pacific


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - No
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - One. MassiveCraft
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - Once. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/101826-application/


How did you hear about us?: - I was searching for a server and stumbled upon this one
What do you think the server will be like? - Large, detailed, and filled with respectful players.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - No Flaming


Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Taking the role of a character

What’s metagaming?: - Using OOC information IC

What’s powergaming?: - roleplaying something impossible, forcing the opponent to lose

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Myles Rayne

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 28

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - When I was a boy, I had a passion for nature. Whenever I had a chance, I would go out into the forest, and scale my favorite oak tree, and wait for deer. Whenever one arrived, I would feed it berries, and make mental notes on its characteristics. there was nothing I enjoyed more. At least, until my father would return. My father was a sailor, who would travel from port to port always meeting new and interesting people. every time he returned, he would bring me a souvenir from his destination. Once he brought back a rare plant. Another time he brought the skull of a snow wolf. But the most important thing he brought back, was his prized nautical telescope. When he gave it to me, I was thrilled. It was wonderful being able to see the deer come in advance. Then my father died. One day i was in the forest when a lumbering beast that appeared to be some sort of mutant. It was the size of our shed, and looked like a scaly rooster. Unlike any normal person, I was not terrified of the creature. In fact, I was amazed by it, and proceeded to sketch its figure on a scrap of paper I was carrying. Never before had I been so excited, so filled with adrenaline, that I did not notice that my father was right behind the beast. As i watched, my father called out my name, and alerted the beast to his presence. it swiped him to the side with its tail as if he was a sack of potatoes. It then exhaled a horrifying black mist that petrified whatever flesh it touched. Before the effect could reach his head, the monstrous creature ripped his head off, and flung it behind itself. It then landed in my lap. I believe it was just shock, but I could have sworn that the decapitated head of my father spoke to me. "Hunt the beast down son. Make it feel fear for the first time." I screamed at the top of my lungs, which caused the aberration to runt to and try to claw its way up the trunk of the oak. instinct kicked in. I plunged a stick through its eye. it would have killed me right then and there if my mother had not intervened. She came with her bow, and struck the creature through its shoulder. it let out one final scream, and skulked off to its lair deep in the forest. Years later, i got a job of a sailor, just like my father, but was discharged for being reckless and self destructive. I soon came back to my home after that, and found that my mother had died. Before I left to find a new meaning in life, I went to my oak tree to find that beside it, was my mother's bow, my father's cloak, my telescope, and a note. written upon it, was,"Don't give up the ghost yet. carry us with you, wherever you go." After that I began doing odd jobs to survive, but when i was hired to hunt down a pack of overly aggressive wolves, i learned that I was an exceptional tracker. I took more tracking/hunting jobs, and it became my career. From this day on though, I am still hunting the beast that made me the man I am now.

What are they like (personality)?: - Reckless, arrogant, intelligent, occasional drunkard.

What are their ambitions?: - Make a living, track, study, and kill new animals. Hunt down the cockatrice that murdered his father.

Do they have any special skills?: - Acrobatic, and skilled with a bow. Extremely talented tracker of animals and humans. telescope increases vision. Can easily skin an animal. Drawing ability is amazing. Can draw a subject in minutes, with fine detail.

What are their weaknesses?: - Cares little for his own or his allies lives. Prone to fits of rage and depression. Below average with a sword. average with a dagger. Alcoholic.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Myles wears a green cloak that is beginning to age. Underneath, he wears a standard hunting shirt, which has noticeable seams from being sown together. there is an indentation where Myles's telescope is in the lining. He wears cloth pants that also have noticeable seams, and have two daggers on his lower legs for emergency reasons. he has to side pockets for carrying evidence for later analysis. he wears leather boots. Myles suffers from heterochromia iridium, which gives him different color irises, one blue, the other green. Myles's hair is average length.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - 



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - Suffering from computer problems. Unable to post any kind of pictures. I hope this is not an inconvenience.



Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!
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Your application has been...

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-While yet being a very good first attempt, there are a few major things that need to be fixed.

 

-Your definitions are very short, I suggest you expand on them, possibly using an example.

 

-Your biography include no server lore, server lore can be found on the wiki. 

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

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