[Denied] [Pending] Ostrichchild App

[OstrichChild 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: OstrichChild

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: To obey all the rules :)

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Skype group chat

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Taking on the role of another person/thing

What is metagaming?: Breaking character 

What is powergaming?: Not giving another player a chance to respond

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Rowan deGrey

Character’s gender: Male 

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography : Back when I was born, my mother died while giving birth to me and my father raised me until I was old enough to venture on my own. My father taught me alot about pride,  and to be weary of trusting others. He left every night to go to our local inn and drank to his hearts content, returning late at night, often giving me a drink. My father brought over his friends to gamble a lot and sometimes even let me play.  Soon I started to sneak out during my fathers time at the inns, and met a women who taught me how to be kind hearted and treatothers with respect. She tried to tell me to not be cynical, but me being cynical I refused to listen to her any further, and left town to follow my ambitions.

 

Personality Traits: Cynical, kind-hearted, respectful

Ambitions: To run a inn or blacksmith shop.

Strengths/Talents: Good with my hands, selling items

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Gambling, Drinking 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 5ft 7in, Weight 120

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://prntscr.com/7dswsc

[mitto 2312]

 

All three of your examples need lengthening, they're too vague to be accepted. Maybe include some examples as well.

 

Please lengthen your bio a tad, maybe go over some more important events in his past which made him who he is today.

 

Please include server lore in your biography, this is a must.

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

 

 

Please re apply in 24 hours from now with the changes I have highlighted. If you need assistance or need help with anything please PM me.

[mitto 2312]

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