[Denied] Darkleaf Application 3

[Darkleaf 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Darkleaf

How old are you?:19

Are you aware the server is PG-13:Yes

Have you applied to this server before? :Yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/128255-darkleaf-application/#entry1230542 and https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/128299-darkleaf-application-2/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The One That Says that there are no hacks allowed

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?:No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:A friend told me

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?:Is The Act of asuming a role of a character that they created  or a character that existed previously.

What is metagaming?:Its when a player uses knowledge of the game that  other players dont know. This gives him advantage in the game.

What is powergaming?:Is when you build a character like a god. making him powerful than other players with better traits strenghts,etc.

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name:John Paris

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:20

Biography :My Name is john Paris i was living in GimbleWood With my family.My Father was a good men but he owed a lot of money to a lot of people.My mother was a serious woman,She was so suspicious, rarely she spoked to me.My ather taught me how to handle a sword and make weapons,one day my father bringed me to the market he bought me a lot of things.When we went back to home we saw a smoke.Our house was burning my father broke into the house.My mother die.Quickly my father bringed me to a forest. We were living in there for a while.my father told me a lot of stories of the undead. The war.Heroes.One day we depart.My father told me that we where going to a city.in the way we meet a lot of people. I made many friends one day we camp near a river my father taught me how to fish.later my dad go hunting but he never came back. i´ven trying to find him but i failed.

Personality Traits:Intelligent,Shy,Serious,Cold

Ambitions:Find my Father

Strengths/Talents:Good With The Sword,Hawkeyed

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Light Drinker

Appearance :http://i.imgur.com/j5VoWan.png?1

[_Stigwig 1510]

Your application has a few serious flaws in it that you need to address:

 

- Your biography is too short, please lengthen it to two paragraphs. Along with this you need to incorporate more server lore, for example they could be locations, people, or events.

 

- Your last four fields all lack in detail, lengthen each with more description and expand on your weaknesses. 

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours, please PM me over the forums if you require any help with re-writing your application to fit into these parameters.

[_Stigwig 1510]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.