[Denied] Darkleaf Application

[Darkleaf 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Darkleaf

How old are you?:19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The one that says that there are no hacks allowed

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:A friend Told Me

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?:Is when a player asume a rol

What is metagaming?:Is where a player uses knowledge that only he knows

What is powergaming?:Is Where a player Build a character more powerful than others

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name:John Paris

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:20

Biography:My name is John Paris. My Mother Died when i was born, My Father Took Care of me. He taught me how to handle a sword. When i was 14 years old The undead attacked the town that i was living on.they killed my father,after that i ran into a forest . a elf found me and he took care of me.He taught me how to use a bow. he was a suspicious man when i reached 19 years i left the elf forest. and now i want to avenge my father.

Personality Traits: Intelligent, Shy, Serious,Cold,Calm

Ambitions: Avenge My Father

Strengths/Talents: Good With The Sword and bow

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Impulsive,Prone To Illness

Appearance:http://i.imgur.com/j5VoWan.png?1

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been:

Reasons:

• Meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions need to be expanded upon
• Please avoid using the "undead killed my parents" cliche, it will get you denied in future applications if you continue to use it
• Biography lacks lore and is too short
• In character section overall needs to be expanded

Please fix these problems up and re-apply after the 24 hour denial period. If you have any questions, PM me.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.