7cousin's application

[7cousins 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: 7cousins

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Time Zone, United States

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm smart and love involved computer games like Minecraft. I love to build things as well.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Probably 2-10 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for 1 month.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Roleplaying is like writing a story with your actions.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: An awesome role playing Minecraft experience

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've tried Super-earth but this seemed more interesting.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, orcs, humans, dwarves

-How did you hear about us?: I saw this sever on minestatus

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: 7cousins

In-Character:

-Character Name: Dandor

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: Once the was a peaceful family living in Oren and they had a son named Dandor. The peace couldn't last forever though so when Dandor was 3 his father went on a raid against the elves and was killed. So Dandor's mother caught up in her grief went to the market, bought a sword and went to avenge her husband. Once in the forest though she got lost. As her grief calmed she settled down in the forest though and cared for he son teaching him to read and write among other things.

When Dandor was 8 his mother died from a fever. He buried her with here sword. He had to hunt though so he took the bow his mother had made and learned to hunt, farm, and care for himself. The One and only time he found an elf he climbed into a tree and shoot the elf with his bow in till the elf was no more. Glad that he had done so because he considered it the elves fault both his parents were dead.

Shortly after defeating the elf though he realized he could not avenge his father and mother on his own and he set off to get help. So there he was a young human who had spent most of his life living in the forest setting off to make a living and achieve a vengeance. He soon returned to Oren to achieve this and gain allies and power for his vengeance.

-Character Age: 15.

-Character Appearance: Tall and scared and mysterious

-Character Personality: Dandor is outgoing, unafraid, and very resourceful.

-Your ambitions: To create become powerful and avenge Dandor's parents.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes.

-Can your character mine?: Not very well but he is a fast learner.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, he can build necessities very well and is taking a knack to building other things too

-Can you wield a sword?: No he has never learned though he is extremely skilled with a bow.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is a great woodsman and hunter.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskin...views&link=6949

-Other Information: none

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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