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[teletubie1998 3]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: teletubie1998

 

How old are you?: 15

 

What time-zone do you live in?: Central European

 

Have you ever roleplayed before if you have, how?: yes I played kingdoms RPG

 

Have you been on any other roleplaying
servers?: Yes a Kingdom RPG server

 

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link
past applications): No

 

How did you hear about us?: Of a friend who is already on this server

 

What do you think the server will be like? Super
awesome

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

 

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with
the most?: Powergaming also isn’t allowed

 

What is roleplaying?: playing as a character, most of the time it is a
fantasy character.

 

What’s metagaming?: when you force another character, to do something that
they don’t want to do.

 

What’s powergaming?: Something you know, but your character doesn’t know

 

What’s your character called?: Athan

 

 

What race are they (and sub-race)?: Human

 

What sex are they?: Male

 

How old are they?: 36

 

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family
(Include server lore when writing):

 

 Athan was born in Kingston with his mother, his father
died of  illness . So all what Athan knew
about his father is what his mother tolds and what he red in the books he wrote
by his self. Athan wants to be a great warrior like his father once was. But
what he didn’t know is that his father wasn’t a great warrior but a simple
writer who was writing stories about a warrior. When he was 19 he left Kingston
and he travelled to Luminaire. To live by the elves, because he wants to
learn how to use a bow.

 

What are they like (personality)?: he is selfish and likes to have a walk,
he enjoys life and is very positive. He is smart and he is good with problem
situations.

 

What are their ambitions?: to be as great as his father was.

 

Do they have any special skills?: He is a great swordsman and he is good with
plants an nature.

 

What are their weaknesses?: he can’t ride a horse and he is afraid of
darkness and slimes

 

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: he has
long brown hair and a small beard. He is small and skinny and he is a blank.

 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - 

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin:

 

 

 

 

[IrishPerson 693]

Under Review

 

 

I've denied your application for a few reasons, they are as follows:

 

Your definitions are incorrect thus they need to be corrected and expanded upon.

 

You lack server lore in your character's biography, I suggest adding some and expanding greatly on the whole character section.

 

Please re-apply after twenty four hours of the edit (seen below). If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a message and I will help you as much as I can.

Edited November 6, 2013 by MrGreene

[IrishPerson 693]

Moved to Denied Forum