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Out-Of-Character Information
 
The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - gouthic777
How old are you?: - 13
What time-zone do you live in?: - Eastern
 
 
Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Yes I have roleplayed on a coupled games I.E Wow, Minecraft (Pirate Roleplay) ect...
 
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes like I said in the other question I have Roleplayed on a pirate server
 
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - No I have not
 
 
How did you hear about us?: - My friend noah (Ghaliban) IRL told me about this server so I checked it out and I was hoping that I could play it with him
 
What do you think the server will be like? - I think it will be fun, Thrilling, Exciting
 
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes I have read the rules
 
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - I agree mostly with this rule "You must not use your soulstone to escape combat and arrest or to avoid roleplay".
 
 
Definitions
 
This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!
 
What is roleplaying?: - 1 definition of Roleplaying is acting if you were your character in real life act how you think that person would act.
 
What’s metagaming?: - Metagaming is having like having items you should not have and you should not try to do it.
 
What’s powergaming?: - Powergaming is doing something that is out of there capability
an example is: Going into a war and not getting hit once.
 
In-Character Information
 
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
What’s your character called?: - Hothan
 
What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human
 
What sex are they?: - Male
 
How old are they?: - 15
 
Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - When Hothan was little he played with his friends everyday until the day his mother Glinda died because of a attack of the other kingdom he swore to get his revenge his father Ildian showed him the art of attack and how to handle a sword and he got better and better one day the kingdom accepted him as a Soldier and seeked out to kill the king of the other kingdom.
 
What are they like (personality)?: - Normaly happy, Hard Headed, wants things to go his way 
 
What are their ambitions?: - In the future he hope's to be a war commander
 
Do they have any special skills?: - Expert Swordsmen, Great at forging items
 
What are their weaknesses?: - Not so great at farming and Sneaking around
 
Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Brown hair, blue eyes, round ears and long arms
 
Anything else you want to say about them?: - Not really anything else I wanted to say about them
 
 
 
Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - My screenshot should be inserted below or beside this or somewhere on the apply page.
 

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Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.
 
Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.
 
Expand on your definitions. Feel free to use other sites for help but make sure you put the definitions in your own words. Plagiarism will result in an application ban.
 
Make sure you post your application on the Lord of the Craft Minecraft Forums thread as well as our forums here. Our mc forums thread can be found using this link.
 
Try to add more server lore to you biography. You can find tons of it on our extensive wiki page.
 
You may want to age your character more. Being an adept swordsman wouldn't likely happen until he was matured, about age 18.
 
Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.
 
 
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