[Denied]Waffle497 Aplication

[waffle497 0]

What’s your Minecraft
Account Name?: - waffle497

 

How old are you?:
- 15

 

What time-zone do you
live in?: - Mountain Time

 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I have
roleplayed in a lot of games such as GTA5,Gmod,Halo3,Halo4,Gta4,Haloreach and Assassincreed
also other Minecraft severs.

 

Have you been on any
other roleplaying servers?: - yes it was called Massive Craft

 

Have you applied to
this server before?(Please link past applications): - nope first time

 

How did you hear about us?: -My friend Teifamous

 

What do you think the
server will be like? – I think it is of a great server and a great
experience for fantasy RPG. I’ve also been told my by my friends it is a very
great server.

 

Have you read and
agreed to the rules?: - yes

 

What’s your favorite
rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  power gaming I like this
rule because it is a really annoying when you’re just trying to talk to someone
in out of nowhere they kill you. For example scenario you’re talking to someone
and someone comes up behind you and they say stabbed in the gut and die I think
this is very unfair because you never even got a chance to fight back.

 

Definitions



What is roleplaying?: - replying is that when someone takes the
role of another character. For example when you’re a kid and you are playing cops
and robbers with your friend are taking in a role as a cop or Robber.

 

What’s metagaming?: -metagaming is something that when a player has
knowledge that the character doesn’t the player automatically gives a character
that knowledge.for example say the creature the player has seen before but the
character has not the player immediately gives the knowledge of this creature
to his or her character.

 

 

 

What’s
powergaming?: -power gaming is something not where a character could
easily get out of the situation. For example if you were talking to someone and
try to get every situation and they say stabbed in the gut adies this is a very
unfair advantage for the person so they can easily get the situation.

 

 

 

In-Character Information





What’s your character called?: - Trymata

 

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human

 

What sex are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 26

 

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family
(Include server lore when writing): - Trymata grew up in a small town
and his parents owned a farm and he would work on the farm every day of his
life tell one day. There was a huge raid of bandits that took over the town he
hid before they were able to reach him. But his father and mother were not able
to hide and were killed and now Traymata has nothing and is trying to look for
someone body to call friend or family.

 

What are they like (personality)?: -Trymata is a very adventurous
person, he also cares a lot about his family. He is also trying to help anyone
in need of help.

 

What are their ambitions?: - Trymata’s ambitions are to make new
friends or someone who he can even call friends and even a family or start a
family.

 

Do they have any special skills?: - when Trymata was growing up on
a farm on spare time he would take his dad’s weapons and practice how to use
them. Also as he was stealing he grew skills of being I a Thief.

 

What are their weaknesses?: - Trymata only weaknesses is if his
loved ones or friends are in danger he does not what to do and all he try’s to
do is save them with all of his heart.

 

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot
yet!)?: - Trymata has brown hair, Blue eyes, bandana along with his
favorite color red.

 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - no

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/2995325/midevil-person/

[Aislin 4354]

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

1. You need to work on your character a little bit. I'd like you to expand your biography, and give me more detail about your character. What does he do in his spare time? How does he like being a farmer? Is he lonely, or does he have lots of girlfriends? Tell me everything.
2. "Bandits killed my parents" has developed into a cliche character backstory, and while not violating any rules, it is a rather bland backstory and I'd recommend you not focus your character development upon this event.
3. I'd recommend you try and get a nicer skin. Not a necessity at all, and you totally don't have to do it, but I'd suggest it.

PM me if you have any questions.

[Aislin 4354]

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