[Denied]Onm224 Apply

[onm224 57]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - onm224

How old are you?: - 14

What time-zone do you live in?: - GMT + 1:00 hours

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Yes, I’ve been roleplaying since I was 8, but not in a fantasy world like in here

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No, not in minecraft

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - Yes, http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/104607-onm224-apply/

How did you hear about us?: - A few days ago I saw the new Hobbit movie and then when I arrived home I watched the 3 other movies of the LOTR. Then yesterday I was playing minecraft, and an idea came to my head – What if I could be a character of the movie?-, so i googled for some minutes and i found this server.

What do you think the server will be like? – Like in the books, awesome!

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - Please don't spam any of our chat feeds - it's just a headache for people reading them.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Is to act as a determinate person in a determinate situation

What’s metagaming?: - Is using information from out of the game in the game, is like you are in the game and by chat you tell another Player where you are, it is doing something that your character wouldn’t know.

What’s powergaming?: - is doing something without giving the other Player the chance of reacting to that action. For example Player A is walking when Player B cut’s his head instantly.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Amras Lúinwë

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Elf, high elf

What sex are they?: - male

How old are they?: - 98

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - 

 Amras was born in Malinor, his mother Laura and Ialdor his father, were farmers. During the two first decades of his childhood, Amras, learnt the elfic arts and how to fight. But when Amras was 20, his fathers were having economic problems, so Amras decided to join a clan which his only goal was to defend Malinor, but without following the law, so he was taking a great risk. Amras earned enough money for giving economic support to his family for the next 20 years, and when this period ended the farm was fertile again, so Amras didn’t had to work with that evil clan, because his family had no longer economic problems.

When Amras was 40 worked in the farm with his parents for the next 30 years, where he learned how to grow the land, taking care of the farm animals… When he was 70 his fathers had to move to Lin’evaral, only for some months, for recollecting old things from the old sanctuary that his antecessors couldn’t take with them, it was a dangerous , but they had to get something that didn’t tell to Amras. During these months, Amras discovered the botanic, so now it was his new hobby. When his fathers returned, the farm… all the vegetables were dead, Amras didn’t take care of the farm, only of the trees. Ialdor and Laura got very angry with him, they didn’t want him anymore in the farm, because he wasn’t no longer useful in the farm.

So now he was 72, he started taking care of the forests of Malinor, and protecting them from foreigners for several years, with this new job he made a lot of friends that told him many stories and adventures, even some myths.

26 years later, he returned to the Malinor for making a library for exposing these stories to all elves, and for all the elves to expose their stories as well, and also in his free time: get reconciliation with his parents and work again in the farm.

What are they like (personality)?: - He is very intelligent, but also very distrustful from foreigners and the odder races, because when he was younger his father was been stolen by humans and others races several times.

What are their ambitions?: -  Protect the forests of Malinor and build a library.

Do they have any special skills?: - Knowledge of the nature and fighting

What are their weaknesses?: - swimming, because he has never gone to the sea, he has seen it because Malinor is next to it, but he has never  gone there, strange but true.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He is always wearing a white coat, with dark shoes. He is fair-haired and fair-skinned. He’s got  green eyes and thin eyebrows, and as all the elves he is very tall. He also has a blue rock attached to the ban he is always wearing, this rock is from the beach of Malinor, that his father brought to him one day he had to go to the beach.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - No

 

PD- Last time I applied, they told me that the whole apply was full of typos, I’ve tried to correct them all, but sorry if there are still some (I’m not English, if there are som typos, please do not deny my post, put it on pending and tell me, althought I've revised the text several times) , I hope it’s all correct, especially the history because it was the main reason they denied me, i've worked so hard and I really love this character, more than the other two times i've applied. 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

-You failed to link both your previous applications.

-Your application is filled with twice as many spelling, and grammatical errors than previously.

-Your biography is incoherent, and hard to read.

-"Apparently his father being stolen by humans many times in the course of Amras's life is not a big enough deal to put into the biography?"

-"Where in Malinor is Amras from? as all you mention is just 'Malinor' but later in the application you mention Lin'Erval."

-"How could he be protecting the forests of Malinor for 26 years, and yet 'return' to Malinor? the forests of Malinor are INSIDE Malinor."

-"What is a botanic?...A book on the study of Botany?"

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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