[Denied]The Bio Of Sevran Bowstring

[Legoface1 12]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  Legoface123
How old are you?: - 10
What time-zone do you live in?: - Gmt  Greenwich mean time


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -  Yes but most people went ooc
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  Yes
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): -  3rd time


How did you hear about us?: - Youtube and planet minecraft
What do you think the server will be like? -  A fun and proper lord of the rings themed role play experience
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -  Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  No powergming


Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  Making a character  and playing as them

What’s metagaming?: -  Speaking with knowledge your character is not suppose to have

What’s powergaming?: - Saying  your character can do basically impossible 

In-Character Information Information about your character

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Sevran Bowstring

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -  Human, northerner

What sex are they?: -  Male

How old are they?: -  23

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): -   sevran never really  knew where he came from, his father always said he was found in the city of new Abresi  as a baby by his father Greylum. His father was a hunter and lived on the hills of the Plains. Sevran  had two brothers  one was called Allum and the other was called  Malex. Malex was always fishing and his other brother went missing in the wilds . From an early age Sevran's father tought him to hunt with a bow and arrow and climb.when Sevran was 21 he went away travelling to find adventure and a promising life somewhere in Anthos

What are they like (personality)?: -  Kind, determined,brave (not always though) .

What are their ambitions?: -  To find adventure and a nice  city to live in

Do they have any special skills?: -  Good with a bow, really good climber

What are their weaknesses?: - Terrified of undead, can get sick easily

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Brown hair,brown eyes, normal human size,light 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - Sevran  is ok with a sword but not the best



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  I'm sorry all the screenshots are 650 kb and I can not find the link to the skin  but it is called henry's skin and can be found on planet minecraft

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

-All your definitions are too short, try and expand upon them. Maybe use an example?

-Your biography is much too short.

-Your biography doesn't really make sense...

"Malek was always fishing - and his brother went missing in the wilds.

And than Malek's dad randomly chooses to teach him archery and climbing."

-Try and expand upon your character's personality.

-You need to include a screenshot of your minecraft skin.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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